Otakuite+ | Posted 06/23/10 | Reply
Thanks for so detailed comment! I'm really impressed of it xD
So what about the arms, yes, the left is wrong...but it is the first time i'm drowing such pose, so i'll try my best next time
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/12/10 | Reply
Aww I don't think you failed at all! And besides, with each piece of art we create, there's always room for improvement ^^ So you're alright, don't worry!
Aside from that, I looked through your portfolio and my goodness I was pretty impressed with your monochrome work ^^ I think this is one of your best black and white pics that I've seen!
I really love the detail you put in his hair and clothes..I think those are my favorite parts of the pic. The expression is mysterious, but also serene which I like ^^ I don't really understand the pose but you might have chosen for it to be ambiguous? xD
In any case, you did SUCh a wonderful job with the shadows...they are practically almost perfect! Although, if there are some areas of critique, I would say to take a look at the anatomy. I thought the pose made pretty good sense until it arrived at the left arm..it's a bit hard to distinguish which arm is which and the way his arm is drawn makes it appear as if the shoulder, back, and arm have all blended together. Furthermore, the length of the arm is also too far out, it should be a bit shorter.
Nonetheless though, lovely piece of work! I can't wait to see more from you ^^ I'll be watching out for your work!