Well... I tried to clean it up at least. lmao Indian Inks are messy..! Photoshop's Eraser Tool is Maaaaagical. :3

What I Changed: [-First Draft-]

Well first of all, I had to fix the top of the head on Kristine. It was a bit too high at second glance. The same applied to Asuka. So I wound up completely erasing the head of Asuka and redrawing it completely. I guess I have a little more confidence in myself to be able to do that. (::*used to never have the courage to erase and draw it back better*::) I fixed her shirt and tried to make most of the lines make sense on all three characters. Some were defying the laws of the horizon. Other than this, small details not worthy of mention. :P