I'm sorry if this is in the wrong category!

This is to my friend Dani who is the bestest in the world!

The story behind this one:
Dani swore under her breath as she tried to unjam her gun. The target holds up his own gun only a few feet away from her face, time was running out, and so were her options. Dani looked up, desperate for a way out. She stumbled back as the target shot at her feet. Threatening.
"Your mine." His wild eyes mocked her.
Dani shut her eyes waiting for the sound of the shot and the pain of death. But then an arm was around her shoulders and a familiar voice whispered in her ear. "I've
got you're back."
She jumped slightly to the bang of a gun firing. Her eyes widen as the target fell to the ground.
Reno's arm extended and the gun in his hand steamed a little. The arm tightened around her shoulders and she lifted her hands and pressed them to her so his arm held her even tighter. "Thank-you."
"Anytime....partner."

This was my first try with my new tablet! What do you guys think? Constructive criticism? Please?

Reno belongs to Square Enix
Dani belongs to me (So if you steal her you're gunna get it.)