***THIS IS THE EDITED VERSION***
Click Here for the original. I hate shrinking and cutting out things so the file size is up to standard...

This took SOOOOO long to do!!! I put about 27 hours total in it, but it was spanned out across about more than a month's time.

I NEED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ON THIS!!!!! I don't want "pretty" or "this is awesome" I want positive AND negative stuff about this.

Things you need to know before the Critique:
I used NO references for the landscapes. I was just shooting in the dark for both of them.
I do not have a blending tool, just this fadey, smokey-ish brush thingy...so be gentle on the fading effects and stuff.

So how'd I do? Is it good? Terrible? Does something look wrong/right?

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Tsumetai Hi and everything within it© me

Manga Studio Debut 4
Wacom BAMBOO Tablet