I am working on the story a little but here is the basic rundown. This is Norbarel and Calien. Yep that is a girl. He is and she once was an immortal. What happen to her is she went through this process call the Rive. The Rive makes an immortal mortal but when it does it also shatters the person’s being into several items and spreads them across the land. This is usually a forced process as it was with her. The pieces are things like looks, gender, powers, and memories. After this happened, she was going to be killed but Norbarel saved her from the immortals then took her to the land of the mortals. Now they must go and find the items that are of her to make her whole. I am going to try to write this but I think it would be really good as a game.

The creature in the background is also a Rive but it did not loose so much of itself and was allowed to leave after the process. Though all immortals look basically human, if they loose certain parts of themselves, they can be drastically altered and turn into beats, giants, monsters, and specters.

The mountains and forest behind them is the area just outside the immortals’ realm. Behind the hills you can see two of the tree towers that the immortals use to keep an eye on themselves and also to look upon the mortals in their daily life. Yes one is sticking out of the guy’s head. Sorry for that. The third one is just right of the picture near a lake of lava that keeps guards the Northeast of the immortals’ realm. Behind and to the west is a turbulent shoreline, keeping mortals from entering the land by sea.

Last, the symbol in the bottom corner is for the immortals. The three triangles that make it represent: form, power, and wisdom. With the three together it makes immortal life.

Well that is most of it. I hope you like the concept… and the picture of course.