Bura at the brink of her consciences, she has more than one.

This is right after Nappa greatly insults her with his version of how her dad treated her mom. And just before She loses her self to one of her parent's fury. I don't think I have to mention who it is.

...something that comes up later in my story that I haven't touched on yet...just a glimpse.

I still haven't found out how to add comments to people's work from my laptop, if anyone has any technical suggestion, I'd appreciate any and all help.