Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/14/09 | Reply
I got fascinated by the title and now the story XD I'm such a sucker for violence and profanities (which is a compliment O___o). More updates would be awesome. :3 pweaseeee~~~?
Otakuite++ | Posted 11/10/08 | Reply
I love this!
I recognize the name Lazarus from a book... 'The Most Dangerous Game' - Lazarus was a ferocious hunting dog I believe lol
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/09/08 | Reply
Keep Going!! This is awesome.
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/09/08 | Reply
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/02/08 | Reply
*gasp* lol Then I look forward to upcoming shockers. =^_^=
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/02/08 | Reply
@X Saara Ann X:
tn!! glad you liked my work
lol..hehehe i'm just getting started on it.. hahaha stay updated lols...
No, no, no, no, no! Not nearly flirty enough! *repeatedly smacks table with a fish* More flirtyness! XD lol
Thanks for the update. Look forward to more. =^_^=
Otakuite+ | Posted 11/01/08 | Reply
you are such an awsome drawer , and that story is just fantastic !
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/31/08 | Reply
Very neat plot you have going on ^^
I'm looking forawrd to reading more in the future!
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/31/08 | Reply
uhmm... phtoshop.. downloaded some tones and brushes in the net then.... i traditionaly inked and sketch the pages
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/29/08 | Reply
Heh... Well isn't he the Cassanova. =^_^= Looking forward to more updates.
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/28/08 | Reply
This manga rocks!!!! Keep it up!
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/28/08 | Reply
hahaha.. i remember that scene!!! lolzzz
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/27/08 | Reply
[Chapter 2, Page 10 response]
(*laughs*) Ouch! That had to hurt! (Reminds me of the time when Hiei fell out of tree after listening to a demon whistle...)
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/26/08 | Reply
This manga of yours is just too AWESOME! I'm in love!!!
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/26/08 | Reply
This is awesome!!!!!
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/26/08 | Reply
Yep, =^_^= Laza-kun is a-okay!
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/24/08 | Reply
really, thanks i thought i messed up his face there... but come to think of it's still okie...
Otakuite | Posted 10/23/08 | Reply
i read this and fell in love hope u keep it up forever.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
I don't think there's anything wrong with Lazarus in any of the panels. =^_^= Waiting to see what happens next. =^_^=
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
wow this is an this a cool story, and nice artwork by the way>_<
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
yeah!!! tnx.. i'm happy that i update whaaa pc fixed
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/20/08 | Reply
The plot's thickening! It's not that simple. Great Manga.
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT
*3 hours later*
LUV IT LUV IT!!!!!! Phew finnaly.....CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Puppet-Chan
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
heya!!! tnx for reading my manga lols.... hope you enjoyed readimg it
lol i love my avi too!!! *never changes avatar for a long time*
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
Awwww This is so cute! I hope they get away safely ;w;
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/19/08 | Reply
I LUV it so far! This is sooooo
awesome! Ur right the chibis r cute!
I Luv ur avatar! Its so cute!
Well, c ya!
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
Hey, don't cry. I meant "terrible" by horrible place to stop. I LOVE THE STORY!!!
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/15/08 | Reply
np im like a grammar/ spelling freak. except when its like, casual typing. if u kno what i mean.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/15/08 | Reply
Aw, well isn't that cute? =^_^= Well, intrigued to see where this is going. =^_^= I'll wait for the next page.
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/15/08 | Reply
I love this scene!! Sooo cute!!!!! More Pages!! You Rule!!!
[Chapter 2, page 1 response]
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! This scene is so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!!! X3 (*HUGS*--because lower-case doesn't quite express what I want XD)
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/15/08 | Reply
aww.... wish you try to read it.... there a lot more to it that that lol....
tnx fr the comment!!!
whaaaaa.. i really need to check (maybe 10 times) the page after i post it!!!
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
Terrible WELL Awesome Cliffhanger into the next chapter! Except for the typo mistakes, the story's fabulous!!! I can't wait until the next chapter.
Have a great day!!
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
Happy to try and help. ^^
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
great!! i'll be working on my anatomy more and mybe seek help on my grammar problems..... thank you!!!
I love it so far! I believe its good enough to be a professional manga sold in stores! X3 Other than a few typos and anatomical things that seem off to me (some hands and profiles), its looking great. ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter!
OMG thanks for ponting that out!! i always get that.. whaaa and i didn't notice it!!! thank you
btw the main character's name is Gail.. lolzzz
oh and on the end of chapter one, u have a mistake. its the second to last dialogue where it says, "Good, Hah!! That bastard thinks he was the one who was sold, well in fact HER sister is our main target..."
its supposed to be his sister. just a little typo.
oh wowieee george is HOT!!! and so is whats his face. the main character *scrunches face thinking* uh... i cant believe i forgot his name!! wellz anyways great job!!
lol glad you like the story so far...
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/14/08 | Reply
[End of Chapter 1]
And the plot thickens! Great cliffhanger to get into the next chapter!
me too.. lol...
Thank you!!! i'm not much of a writer.. but, i'm doing my best to make the story more interesting... hope you enjoy it...
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/13/08 | Reply
Awesome more pages!!!!! I'm o happy now!!
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/13/08 | Reply
wow!You really captivate your audience.You must be a really good writer.
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/11/08 | Reply
whaaa... change of plans... i'll make has a totall of maybe 4-5 volumes.. the story is finished.. this ain't gonna be a one shot manga...lol .. maybe i'll post the first volume here....
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/11/08 | Reply
Brilliant story and characters. Keep it up!!
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/11/08 | Reply
yay basta maghanap kalang twins kami yub LOL
yay! nae-excite na ako X3
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/11/08 | Reply
Brilliant stuff,cant wait for some more!
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
cge ba!! lol....
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
awww pero kung pupunta ka sa komikon hanapin mo nalang ako sa REVEL sa tiange XDD
magbebenta ako dun, sana magkita tayu~ X3
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
Oh! Come on! It was just getting good! Real good! Please submit more sometime soon! It's really great so far... Don't stop!
thank you!!!! i hope you like the story too!!!!
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
YAY!! u made more pages!!! XD I'm so happy! It looks sooo good ^_^
Victor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
The comments on this got so much in the matter of just one day. Wow.
I love your art. The cover is really nice.
RikuisHOT (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY DO! xD
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/10/08 | Reply
Yaay good luck
tnx!!! i'll do my best to update at least 2 page a day... hope i can maintain the phase...
THis is really good and I like the art too its nicely drawn. When is it going to come out can't wait.
thank you!!! hope you enjoy this manga so far....
This is going to be a good manga x3 can't wait till you finish it!
You are such an amazing drawer! xD
Otakuite | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
AH! It's so pretty!
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
lol, yeah... his sister is one of this mangas main character...
glad u'r liking the story....
tnx, glad u like it
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/09/08 | Reply
WOW! Now, he has a sister. And she's not allowed to come with him. Nice unexpected twist!
Thanks, but don't push the story and give us less quality. Good Luck!!
sorry for the slow update, i'll do my very best to update at least 2 page or more...
I'm hooked! Maybe put up more pages than one each time, please.
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Great^^ I hope it works out for ya!
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
it really bugs me when that happends.. next time i'll make sure that the 3rd page will be okie...
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
YAY!! ANother page!! Nice job!! Make more okeeeeeeees!! XD
Wow, AMAZING art and cover! Very artistic! Keep it up!
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Yay! More! More! :3 Please keep it up! If you need help, just ask Rishi! :D
And you're right. The link to the other picture is better. Too bad that the site has problems and stuff sometimes.
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
Definitely going to follow this one! Great beginning!!
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/08/08 | Reply
that was gud i got into it n got disapoint in the same time kus i whanet to read more hope i see more
hehehe maybalak sana.....kaso hnd p tpos.. hehehe
wahhh are you going to sell this at komikon?
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/07/08 | Reply
oooooooooo I like it!!!!
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/07/08 | Reply
awesome :] cant wait to see moree :3 ~Amp
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/06/08 | Reply
lol working on it....
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/06/08 | Reply
Pleeez make the next pages soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wowzers, this looks awesome beyond all reasoning ^_^ I really look forward to more :)
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
Okaaaaay. If you don't wanna, that's fine. Still, though, I'd love to read it and I'm not sure how I'd be able to buy it from you.....
The Marker Maniac. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
this looks interesting ^_^i hope you can continue ^_^
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
wow!! and detailed :o
Grand Otaku | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
You have a really nice drawing style. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Update when you can. ^.^
Miss Anonymous: ARE YOU CALLING THE PLIGHT OF PIZZA EVERYWHERE STUPID?!?!? >:O
Stealthy Puppy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
it'll be awhile......
yeah i'm thinking just the whole chapter1, but about posting it all??? well let me think about it...
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/05/08 | Reply
Brilliant!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
oooooooooooo! I love the artwork. I hope you make more soon! Cuz now I'm interested in the story
Rishi ish waiting for more.
...is more done yet?
C'mon, you're making Rishi wait forever!!! TT_TT
this looks AWSOME cant wait for more
Awesome. You'll sell this?
I'm hoping you'll be posting the whole thing on theO too, right? Cuz I wanna read it and don't know where I'd be able to buy it^^
He's really awesome looking. As always, love you're style, and you totally rock
I love the art I wonder what is going to happen.
I can tell it's gunna be awesome 8D