Senior Otaku | Posted 04/26/13 | Reply
Thank you for the observation and opinion. I will not make excuses for the mistakes I've made cause I really don't know much about making comics. LOL I must admit that as I was reading I understood part of it, and then I got lost. LOL Visual learner... But I must agree that there are many times my paneling sucks and so does my anatomy....However, I will try to get better in all aspects. I don't mind your truthfulness. I like it! And I don't consider it a flame at all.
Thank you for such a detailed explanation. I'll have to read it more than once. LOL
Thank you! Sorry for the late reply...I'm rarely on here on TheO. I spend more time on dA. However, thank you for that ever kind comment. Glad you're enjoying the story.
Otakuite+ | Posted 03/29/13 | Reply
Being the freak I am, I twitch over tiny little things. While your drawings and overall paneling is brilliant, certain poses do not look very well in certain panels, which is a real shame because some of them are really good. I will use page 80 as an example. You're cross-cutting horizontal panels at the bottom are most commonly used for either extreme close-ups of say the eyes or of the scenery, but here you only use it for little shots of characters. You could have expanded this entire page into at least two pages. Here's an example of a more preferred means of doing this page: The three top panels should probably not be lopsided. The first two character positions are okay in general, but more of the background is necessary to get a feel for where they are in the first panel, and the dark atmosphere should be darkened more. The third panel should be slightly wider than the earlier two and possibly cut off most of the legs so we focus more on Kagome's irritated expression. As I mentioned before, the horizontal cuts are not something I am a particular fan of not for the fact that it is particularly bad, but it doesn't seem to suit the moment well. Perhaps a smaller panel of little-pixie-monkey (my beloved nickname because I'm weird like that)raising their hand with a finger raised and then having a slightly wider shot of them explaining part of it, maybe with a flashback of Kagome falling through the well. Then have Kagome state that she belongs with her family in an equal length (neutral) panel, then have the next panel slightly wider of little-pixie-monkey questioning this, maybe with more shadows and a dark smile. This makes for both the explanation to be more interesting, and a slightly darker, less airy atmosphere that the backgrounds give off in this panel. I do love your story, and I am not flaming it because I am genuinely interested in it, I just want it to reach its full potential, and I hope you take in some of my advice. Thank you for reading this far, here's a duck.
Otakuite | Posted 03/22/13 | Reply
Oh my, no Inuyash!! This is going amazing, your art/animation is amazing. Please update soon!!
Senior Otaku | Posted 01/04/13 | Reply
I have updated. Just not on this site. ^^; So I'm doing it now. Lol
Otakuite | Posted 12/15/12 | Reply
Please oh please keep working on it, it's so amazing!! Update soon, I beg..
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/18/11 | Reply
LOL Your comments are always a joy to read!
*hug*How r u, fluffy? It's been so long!
Yeah, someone had asked me on dA: "But isn't Kikyo dead already?" I told them that I would explain that part in the story. Cause if she's dead there's no way that she could have a child...
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 08/18/11 | Reply
jshnflablegarsha!!! MORE NEW PAGES!!!! *superultramegaflyinginuistheawesomestglomp*
Ehh? Inuyasha's child with Kikyo??? Noooeeesss e.O
*ignoring the fact that a woman made of bones and dirt shouldn't be able to have children and that Kikyo already died because I'm a nice person who loves your comic and hates Kikyo*
I solemnly swear that I am up to no good~
Senior Otaku | Posted 04/11/11 | Reply
*laughs* 4 you!
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 04/10/11 | Reply
:O ...NEW PAGES!!! *glomps matsu*
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 01/16/11 | Reply
Hewwo :3 My holidays are still going for another 11 days *fist pump*
Aww, yeah? I think this is the first holiday in a while I haven't been sick
Senior Otaku | Posted 01/16/11 | Reply
:D Fluffy, how u been? How'd your holidays go? You know what my best christmas gift was? I was sick....
it doesn't pay to be nice. I'm going to be naughty this year. lol
:DDDDDD NEW PAGES!!! *huggles*
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 11/20/10 | Reply
"And what will be your form of payment?" I lol'd
XD You're not in a brothel!
Senior Otaku++ | Posted 11/18/10 | Reply
Kaede didn't remember her? Oh man, I really want to know what's going on!
Senior Otaku | Posted 11/17/10 | Reply
I'm back from my breaky~~~~
Hope everyone had fun for Halloween, and got lots of candy. LOL I'm on a diet, so that's a no-no for me. ^_^
I'm back from my breaky~~~~
Well, I'm back from my break. Yay! Missed all my friends here in the O. I have lots planned for my story and a new story that we'll see how that goes. Maybe I'll start it next year... we'll see.
Either way, it's good to be back. And expect to see more of me!!! ^_~
Senior Otaku | Posted 09/09/10 | Reply
*****WOT POST UPDATE*****
2 more pgs up, and now it's time to take a break from posting. The next time I'll post will be for a wkend with 6 or more pgs.
Sorry. Cookie? *offers cookie*
I wanted to post more but they weren't ready. I did post up 2 more pgs today. But that's about it for now. I want to do a wkend release like I normally do, so that will take a while.
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 09/06/10 | Reply
Aww, I was hoping for more pages of the story to be added TT^TT Aw well. Character bio's are interesting too!
Senior Otaku | Posted 09/06/10 | Reply
Posted very few up. I didn't expect to post this so soon. I'm just kind of on a role and was excited to post anything up. LOL
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/18/10 | Reply
I have MS Debut 4.0. Since I don't really know all the capabilities, I have no problem with it 4 now.
Well, hope u do get it as a present. We'll keep our fingers crossed. XD
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/17/10 | Reply
yeah I use Manga Studio. But I have the 0.4 debut I want the professional one
hopefully I'll get it on my birthday or Xmas
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/17/10 | Reply
LOL I get that procrastinating feeling often. That's why I've posted the end of Chp 01 now, after having the story posted 4 about a year. ^^;
But yeah, definitely, I hope u find the energy to draw more on ur comic. I really do love the expressions u draw for Hoshiko. I sure u learn from u. U use Manga Studio too, right?
yay it's finished! I look forward to reading chapter 2
hmmm I should finish chapter 2 of DS but I've been procrastinating :P
I'll work on it today! :D
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/16/10 | Reply
*****WOT POST UPDATE*****
Yay! I finally posted the whole chapter. Again, so sorry 4 not being able to post it yesterday as I had said I would. However, it's now up for reading and viewing pleasure!
Thank u all that are supporting and reading WOT!!!!
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/15/10 | Reply
I had thought I would have more time 4 posting today, but as u guys can see I'm pretty late with the release. However, I later(probably 12am my time) will post up the pages I have and the end of Chp01 tomorrow.
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/14/10 | Reply
*snicker* frieza cosplay? Brothers can be a handful, can't they? I have an older brother who still bugs the hell out of me like if he were still a kid. Hmm, that would explain my short temper. LOL
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 08/14/10 | Reply
Argh, it's cos my brother has 20 other pages open, making me look for a frieza cosply -_-;
really? ur comp is getting laggy? I was wondering about u, since u fly through my pgs like in 5 seconds tops. LOL
But yeah... new pages! And expect more 4 tomorrow like the end of Chp01. XD Thanks 4 reading, fluffy!
YAY! NEW PAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGEEEESSSS!!!
Graaaah, laggy computer DX Just finished reading
*****WOT NEWS UPDATE*****
*****WOT NEWS UPDATE*****
So, I decided to post a few pages later today(most likely at night), and the grand pack for tomorrow. I still haven't finished to digital part for about 6 pgs. So I'll finish what I have and post some today, and the rest 4 tomorrow. Enjoy!
And the posts are now up. Please enjoy. Thanks to all my supporters for this story. You are the reason why this story is still going!
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/01/10 | Reply
Wow! Haven't had these in a long while. ;P
The final pgs for Chapter 01 are coming slowly but surely. I need to draw about 2-3 more pgs and it's computer work time(which to me is less time consuming than the drawing part! ^^;) I hope to have them posted by this weekend. If u guys don't see anything this wkend than expect it by the next.
I have about 7 pgs drawn out already! *squeal* So excited!
One minor problem is that i've forgotten how to use Manga Studio. LOL It's been such a long time... ;P
Also, I might split it up for Sat & Sun, or maybe I'll do a 3-day wkend post(we'll see)
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/08/10 | Reply
Thanks. Actually I got off my lazy butt and started drawing more this past wkend. Course, I also haven't been feeling well. But definitely! Expect more goodies. Thanks 4 reading! ^_~
Otakuite++ | Posted 06/02/10 | Reply
That is awesome i cant wait for you to continue your searies. (^_^)
Senior Otaku | Posted 05/11/10 | Reply
LOL *poke* ^_^
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 05/11/10 | Reply
Senior Otaku | Posted 04/14/10 | Reply
Fantasies? About u being surrounded by butterflies? Really? Hmm... I've had fantasies before of being surrounded by cute guys, but mine didn't come true. LOL Oh, wait. or do u mean fantasies about a weird april fools joke? LOL I'm glad u enjoyed the April fools joke. I really couldn't help myself...
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/14/10 | Reply
This is pretty awesome! I had fantasies about something like this! I loved the April Fool's joke XD
Senior Otaku | Posted 04/09/10 | Reply
Wah, australia. That's awesome. I enjoy hearing the australian accent. And it's amazing that ur friend n u can sub in spanish being so far.
Well, anything is possible with distances. I learned a bit of japanese just by listening to music and watching dramas.LOL
-heh! Yeah, I know that that's one of Sessho's nicks. I just hope 2 have the chance to use that one day.
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 04/09/10 | Reply
Hahaha, that is one of his nicknames XD
Haha, thanks "fluffy". That sounds cute, maybe I should have Kagome call Sesshomaru that at some point. LOL
I live in Connecticut and u?
Lolz, I like. And yes, I do read fast!
You have a good weekend too! And call me inu, or fluffy ^^ I'm curious, where do you live?
LOL u like? It's funny u mention butterflies. I recently went n bought a book on butterflies cause I recently wanted to include them more for my OC Renka. Oh! I should draw a new one of him and better looking butterflies. Wow! Now that I think about it, u sure do read fast. LOL
Have a good wkend, inufluffy12!
Hey, everyone! Decided to upload the pgs today so u guys can have fun reading it over the wkend.
Senior Otaku | Posted 04/02/10 | Reply
LOL sorry 4 the scare. I just wanted to mess around with a few brains. I know that the story was going in a serious direction, and I wanted to do something completely opposite and abnormal. I mean, Kagome wouldn't really jump into Inuyasha's arms like that. And all of a sudden having a tiara, and Inuyasha having the crown of a prince...awkward. I really did have thoughts to make it weirder though. Guess I'll have to come up with something else for next year...
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 04/02/10 | Reply
*lets out breath* Good, I thought that was how you were actually ending it DX
Senior Otaku | Posted 04/01/10 | Reply
Since it's already the 2nd of April where I'm at, it's now safe to answer. Yes, it was an April Fools joke. LOL I actually had various scenarios in my head that i wanted to do, but they would've taken a longer time. I did it with the purpose of causing confusion. ^_^; Hope u enjoyed it either way...
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 04/01/10 | Reply
That's... not actually the end is it? *confused* Please tell me it's just an april fools joke --'
Senior Otaku | Posted 03/27/10 | Reply
Thank u. I'm glad u liked it!
Otakuite+ | Posted 03/23/10 | Reply
o. wow. amazin. i finnaly got a chance 2 read it n its alsome. i love it.
Senior Otaku | Posted 03/18/10 | Reply
I had actually scanned a few pgs a while back, but i'm going back and forth between PS and Manga Studio. I find that the work goes much quicker. It's just me posting that goes slower. At the moment I'm taking a break from my comic and i'm going to post a few more pics before I go to my comic. "Lo Natural" was the 1st one. I have to finish a request from VictoriaZepeda in Fanart-central(half way done). Draw 2 more pics I have planned for my new fan comic(which might come out in a LONG while)...and then I'm done with those! *Whew* But I'm so excited because I bought a set of pens for manga n the drawings come out so clean. I love it! ^_^ Enough blah blah.
Busy busy bee~~
Senior Otaku | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
Oh, ur good. But let see as the story progresses n if u can keep getting it on the mark!
Sorry for the long wait. However, I will have a small update for this weekend. It'll be a two part release for Saturday n Sunday.
Thank you for reading this simple story,everyone!
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/16/10 | Reply
I wonder if the mysterious man is InuYasha? Hoping so! I hope you update soon!
Senior Otaku | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
Yup, finally back. How was ur New Years? Happy belated New Years by the way. I've already mentioned how crappy mine went, so i'll just stay silent this time. However, I'll try to work extra hard this year. I even started to color old drawings in colored pencil, which I haven't done in years to try to get my creative juices flowing. Ne, inufluffy, what's your opinion to get inspired to draw? cause where i am right now, nothings flowing.
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
hehe ^^ welcome back!
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 09/20/09 | Reply
I can't wait!
and so the story begins...
Senior Otaku | Posted 09/20/09 | Reply
And finally the end of the prologue. Thanks u guys for reading and motivating me to finish this. So sorry it took so long, however, enjoy. I wanted to release a little mass of pgs and introducing the title to the first chapter. The chapter name is a bit predictable, but that was on purpose. I wanted something close to the first episode of Inuyasha & something the readers can feel close to.
Once again, thanks a bunch I'll disappear for a while again working to finish the pgs of the first chapter, which i just have the written ideas for. Hopefully when I do come back, it'll be to show a full first chapter.
Possible post dates will be posted on my otaku.
And all are welcomed to my recently opened up world titled "WOT NONSENSE" short for "WHEREABOUTS OF TIME NONSENSE". Here I'll be posting....nonsense..LOL I'll be sharing my ideas of where I got ideas for my fan-comic. Like what inspired me, how I wanted a character to be, etc. Updates on my world may be a bit slow, but postings will increase as the story goes on. I wouldn't want to post a spoiler by mistake...! So it will be going hand in hand with my fan-comic.
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 09/18/09 | Reply
Yay! new pages
Senior Otaku | Posted 09/17/09 | Reply
Really? Is that the impression u get about Kags & Inu? Never thought of it that way. LOL
Senior Otaku | Posted 08/17/09 | Reply
Thank u so much! I'm glad u like it so far. And i promise it'll get even better!
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 06/11/09 | Reply
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/10/09 | Reply
Thanks for the encouragement! My cheeks are getting red...
DA FLUFF PUFF (Otaku Legend) | Posted 06/10/09 | Reply
Yay! first to fav, hug and comment! It sounds really interesting, I can't wait to read the rest