This has some of the better art I've seen around here. ^_^
It took me a while to get the story, but it's funny enough.
One thing, though, is that the panelling is very simple and so is the background. Background isn't very important in a short comic like this, but I think it would have been better if there were some.
One reason I might not be able to identify with this too well is that I've never read the comic, so if you want to, just ignore me. ^_^;;
Oh, and you might want to put a little work into your chibis. It's not that bad, but it's not that good either. ^________^
I think you did really good on the caracters. I've only see Alvis on the cartoon, and I've only seen to episodes. The first one and the fourth or fifth one because some channels like to show movies at the time the series, and then skip three or four episodses!!
>__>
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