Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/26/15 | Reply
I read chapter 1! Yay!
I have to say, I was a bit confused. ^_^; I got the gist of what was going on, but I had some trouble on which panel and which speech bubble went first. The panels were divided up strangely too. I'm sure you've improved a ton since this, though.
Excel's speech bubbles were easier to read than the witch's (I forgot her name already *shot*) because of the font. It's OK to change fonts, but fancy fonts are a bit harder to read when printed small like that. The good thing is that all the "speech fonts" were consistent in that they were all a combination of upper and lower case. If one was upper and lower case and one was ALL CAPS that would be jarring. I'm glad you didn't do that.
I like your offbeat sense of humor. The whole thing with the witch eating the bump on her chin (I never heard the word you used before in my life, and now I don't remember it) was really silly and amazing. I wonder, will that come into play somehow in the future of the story?
Call it karma. Call it luck. Me, I just don't give a... BOUNCE!
Otakuite++ | Posted 06/13/15 | Reply
Otakuite+ | Posted 12/18/13 | Reply
Well, u've done v comic so I can only just understand things and it's a bit confusing.
Otakuite+ | Posted 12/17/13 | Reply
V contents showing where v 4 chapters were. Oh, and I really can't understand what's going on.
Otakuite+ | Posted 12/16/13 | Reply
Feel 3 2 tell me what u think huh? Well, the actual lettering in v contents kinda sucked. Too spacey.
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/23/13 | Reply
And Acid Dave is so cool XD My sister and little brother love him and talk about him all the time at my house! serious!!
ashdfjklahfjskalhfjksalhdfjaklhf You finished!!! MAJOR CONGRATS!! This is a life milestone!! I'm so proud of your Izuzu!! And now I want to re-read it and also keep up to date on Excel in Cipherland #2!! :D
You are super inspirational to me, dear <3
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/13/13 | Reply
if you want help with coming up with a cover for the next volume i will gladly help! Let me inspire you *A* ^3^
Lady-person (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/09/13 | Reply
Yeah, I think you should stick to 4-8 panels per page. It lets you draw bigger! :D When I do comics, I usually use about 6 panels per page.
I like how Hyperbola turned the French curve into a staff! :) It looks really cool.
Otakuite | Posted 07/05/13 | Reply
Alright. It's a nice story though.
Otakuite | Posted 07/04/13 | Reply
Some anatomy classes would help you reach your manga goals. Try that maybe?
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/01/13 | Reply
I finally caught up with your newest pages, Izuzu!!! And can I just say YOU ARE AMAZING??!!! You are doing a fantastic job with your story and the art keeps improving like crazy! I really love your work with your tablet, is it becoming more comfortable for you now? Definitely seems like you are a pro with digital!! ;D
Keep it up, dear friend!! <3
Lolita Princess (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/08/13 | Reply
That is so sweet of the Excels to consider Hyperbola's feelings! I hope they try to rescue her from being dissected!
Lady-person (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/24/13 | Reply
Haha! Cathetus is funny. xD And that's a pretty fashionable jail outfit. :P Lucky her!
Lady-person (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/22/13 | Reply
Oh no! When the trial scene started, I didn't expect the Excels to get convicted! D: Hopefully something will go right for them someday... ;u;
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/05/13 | Reply
haha yes first I didn't understand that it was a cosplay convention. I only thought hey there are Yin and L in the same place haha :D After a few pages I recognize it's a cosplay convention :D
I like how u draw both really stunning ^o^
Have fun by watching I also watched it a long time ago maybe I should too XD
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/03/13 | Reply
haha I found yin :D
the last scene of page 52 reminds of the story from the wonderful wizard of oz xD
and the hyperbolas wedding dress looks so gorgeous ♥_♥
haha very cool, clever and confusing story xD
Lolita Princess (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/11/13 | Reply
wow, I love Lawyer Lawrence! You did a great job drawing him and I like his hair
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/07/13 | Reply
I LOVE the blind jury!! Looks like it took a lot of time to do and the effort was well worth it!! :D Great new pages here, Izuzu!
Otaku Legend | Posted 12/20/12 | Reply
Wow... can I say it again? YOU ARE SO AMAZING AND YOUR COMIC IS EPIC!!! I saw the most recent pages and I think they are just super! :D Your drawings, panelling, and screentones are so perfect!!!! Please keep it up, the story is so genius!!!
Lolita Princess (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/30/12 | Reply
hyperbola looks so pretty in a wedding dress!
Lady-person (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/30/12 | Reply
Hyperbola does not like that idea. xDD
...By the way, I found a math-related song that you might like... maybe. xD; I liked it. [click]
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/18/12 | Reply
Hey you're right!! Thankyou for that advice, Izuzu!! Thats just what I needed to hear!! Now I feel like I can go ahead and do my best! Wish me luck :D I hope to get some sort of manga going soon!!
no problem, and Thank YOU!!
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/16/12 | Reply
Ahahaahah I cannot wait!! I'm really wanting to start my own manga again, but i just feel like I should be more concentrated or else I might get lazy... You are so super cool for continuing this amazing story! The ideas and characters u make up really blow my mind, its insanely good!! <3
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/15/12 | Reply
AH NEW PAGE HORRAY!!! I missed this comic @u@ This new page is awesome, my friend!! Lol at the sleeping darts xD You are amazing! <3
Lady-person (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/14/12 | Reply
Ooh, a new page! I wonder what asymptote has in mind... :o
Lady-person (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/18/12 | Reply
Ah! I don't know why I put fairies. xD Sorry! I meant witches. :P
Anyway, I finished reading what you have posted so far. It was fun (especially when hyperbola was at the anime con. xD), and definitely unique. This is the first math-themed comic I've seen. Can't wait to see what happens next! :D
Lady-person (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/17/12 | Reply
I'm on page 18 so far, and this is pretty interesting! :) I like how all the fairies are named after math terms. I also like the idea that Hyperbola is afraid of asymptotes! xD That would explain why real hyperbolas never cross the asymptotes.
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/25/12 | Reply
YAY!!! Can't wait :D I'll be sure to keep up with your new pages^^
I just caught up on the most recent pages, Izuzu!!! You're seriously a genius *3* Doing a comic AND doing math in it is tough! I liked and laughed on page 57! Nice work ;D Keep it up my friend!!
Lolita Princess (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/02/12 | Reply
the story is really impressive! i love pg 54
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/29/12 | Reply
Oh so cool!! My sister has an iPod touch that she recently got so I'll tell her to check it out :D
Its so funny, I never thought I'd be able to write a manga let alone a romance shoujo!! >//u//< I hope I don't get embarrassed writing it haha! But I'm going to have fun... its working out better then my usual ideas. At least a bit of randomness or odd scenes won't look so out of place xD lol thankyou my friend!
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/28/12 | Reply
I know >_< I'm sorry for disappointing you! I'm just not interested in continuing right now... But you have inspired me lots!! If anyone is going to keep me on track, its you You're so kind and Cipherland really inspires me!! I'll definitely continue... I just don't know when or how O_O BUT I WILL!!! ;D
Oh woah, that sounds like an interesting game! I haven't heard of it before, I wish I could play it too!!!
Anyway, I'll be sure to post some sort of comic pages soon^^
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/27/12 | Reply
Lol I agree^^ And its ok, I don't think you're bragging! I can really tell you improved when I compare the old pages to the new pages :D But the whole story is great!!!!
Oh I'm starting a romance shoujo soon cuz I really want to do it xD! I know I haven't completed my Sherlock Holmes manga yet, but I'm not feeling like working on it right now xP
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/25/12 | Reply
REALLY?! I honestly did not notice!! Lol you sound like me xD I end up seeing my mistakes a lot! I don't think you did badly on this though!! *just goes and double-checks* Wow girl, you're bothered about that?! ITS SO AWESOME!!! Don't think anything different! I love how you drew Hyperbola! <3 You draw really well and I think you've even improved from when you first started writing it! :D Your style is great^^
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/24/12 | Reply
Wow thats so cool!! I usually do pretty well in math but its not my favourite subject... I think its neat that you got so interested that you learnt so much and made a comic out of it :D So awesome!!
COMPLETELY AWESOME TABLE OF CONTENTS!!!!! I cant wait to keep reading :D
Awesome! Congrats on the A!!! I'm so happy for you!
Woah, you definitely know lots about math! I need to keep reading your comic to learn more myself xD LOL and here's an idea: when my dad says I should study and not read comics, I can say that this comic is very educational^^ lol
I know you'll do amazing on Calculus! I was homeschooled for most of highschool and the system I did was based on math so I did lots of math... but I never learnt as much as you! Now I'm even more interested in Hyperbola^^ Its so cool that you took your studies and created this comic out of them :D
Talk to you soon! <3
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/23/12 | Reply
Haha! Yes I really love stories based on real facts and such, even though the story is fiction! I need to learn more anyway :D I find it amazing how you fit in everything. And it all makes sense! Like how you turned Hyperbola into the villain witch because of an experience you had with your math lessons. Its so neat!!! Oh and did you add another page the other day? I'm going to have to keep reading! :D
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/21/12 | Reply
Lol I love long replies ;D I enjoyed reading it!
This might be a shorter comment... because mostly all I have to say now is that YOU ARE A GENIUS!! I'm serious... This story of yours is so unique and well done! And how you began it, while doing studies... Man, you are so smart^^ I would never been able think of this!
Oh yes, and your character designs are really cool too!!!
I can't wait to keep reading^^ I'll let you know when I continue :D
Ah! I continued reading today from page 17!! I hit the half-way point, around page 30. So now its question time! mwahahaha xD
Did you write this comic without planning it? Cuz its so detailed! I really like how you add mathematical elements to it! (did you think up this story while in math class? lol) I'm learning lots too cuz I never knew some of those mathematical signs and I didn't know about Arthur Caley! Are you a math whiz?? xD seriously, you know your stuff and you've created a one-of-a-kind comic here! I really love it!
And did you start adding some digital effects? I noticed in the part with the fire at the Doctors... it looks really cool!
You're improving as well! I can tell, your style and page setup are even better :D I like your creativity^^ Sometimes I lose whats going on but thats my fault.. I just have to look over it again and then I understand!
And I was like 'SO GROSS' when the witch is shown in her true form... a nevus!! O_O That was gross!!! xD And Ellipse is so funny xD Haha that part where he escapes with wings is hilarious! I'll continue reading^^ I would usually be faster at reading and commenting, but its hard for me to get my laptop for that long >_< So I end up reading it on wifi, but then I can't comment until I get back on my laptop! Anyway, I really enjoy your comic! Keep up the great work, my friend!! <3
sorry for the long comment xD
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/04/12 | Reply
Cool! I like how you do the text on the computer... Its so much easier I'd think! You don't know how many times I've messed up while writing the words in my comics xP
Thats so neat! I do the same thing! Its a lot easier for me to draw from references ^^'
LOL I'd probably be so scared if I did that too, but I thought it was really funny, especially when Excel #3 pulls up the rope and the witch isn't there xD Poor Excel!
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/03/12 | Reply
So here's some questions for you!
Did you draw this traditionally with pen? And did you do ever do a pencil storyboard first or did you just draw it from your mind?
I shall be back soon to continue reading and asking more questions and commenting!!
Oh and I love the parts where Excel #1 wears fake nevus, and Excel #3 accidentally pushes the witch down the well! xD I really like the expressions you draw too! ^_^ I'll keep reading and commenting as I go!
Yeah, I had to stop though cuz my little brother had to go to bed and he didn't want me to keep reading without him^^
Alright! Thankyou! For the most part, everything is really clear though so don't worry! And thats ok about the bananas, I love them and it is really fun to send gifts to each other! I'll send you some more, except I'm running out of gifts xD LOL
I truly do! I really like your style and how hard you worked on it!!! I know that you're not finished yet, but I'm finding myself wishing that I could work as hard as you have!! :D You're so awesome!
And my little brother didn't want me to stop reading it!
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/02/12 | Reply
I'm on page 17 now^^ my brother and I are enjoying it lots^^
I really like how you've told that story! I got a bit confused at one part, I admit... but I read your descriptions underneath! I like how its so funny but there's also a moral of your story! I totally love how you wrote it... Appearances shouldn't matter! And i was cheering for the 3rd Excel!!! xD I love her name too by the way!
Ok I shall continue reading and talk to you tomorrow probably! thanks also for all the gifts x3 Good night for now, my friend!
Hey! I LOVE THIS COMICS Its so hilarious and well done :D I'm reading it with my little brother right now... We just finished the first chapter! I was laughing a lot xD You're really good at writing stories and adding humour^^ I really like your style too! And I see that you've written quite a bit too! Good for you :D i can't wait to read it all!
Lolita Princess (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/03/12 | Reply
i'm glad your happy with it!
Lolita Princess (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/02/12 | Reply
i appreciate the amount of time you devote to this comic! its complex and i enjoy seeing it updated. it's hard work to keep a webcomic going like this.
keep it up!
Lolita Princess (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/16/11 | Reply
i am loving those flowers of phrases! :D
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/03/11 | Reply
Oh yes! As I go on, I can see the comic becoming more and more wonderful! It's easier to read! I just love it. You're doing a great job. It's VERY funny. I'm extremely proud ^^ Great work Otaku~
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/31/11 | Reply
I really like this ^^ It's a bit confusing because of the layout, but I think you're making some great progress. I like the story so far. It's pretty funny! I'm happy to read more ^^
Lolita Princess (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/27/11 | Reply
i can see that you put a lot of work into this comic! keep up the good work!
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/13/11 | Reply
OH WOW! SO its all in your head? that really admirable..thats awesome. I wish I could do that..Im a bit insecure in my work so I would probably keep on changing it :/
Keep it up!
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/10/11 | Reply
Thanks for encouraging me! What do you do before you draw them? DO you plan the on a page before or...?
Grand Otaku | Posted 08/09/11 | Reply
You are doing really great! I really hope you keep it up and finish the manga. I wish I could start the manga..but the paneling is so hard. But you attempted it, so thats awesome in itself already!
I respect anyone who can create a comic, and even more because its really good! Great job on the paneling, but I suggest putting less on a page because it may look crowded! But still, I can't wait to see more :)
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/04/11 | Reply
THAT WAS AWSOME! XD Your comic ROCKS! XD XD XD
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/03/11 | Reply
That's AWSOME! I love your comic, it's funny and interesting! Your doing an amazing job... I can't wait ta see the other pages! XD
King of LLamas (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/30/11 | Reply
Haha, no problemo~!!! :D
C yaz!! ^U^
King of LLamas (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/29/11 | Reply
I really like this :3
It's very good ^w^
Keep up the great work! :D
And I'll definitely check up on it~ :D
C yaz!! ^w^
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/21/11 | Reply
Looks awesome so far--keep up the great work!
I really love your drawing style--maybe you find this challenge to your liking?