I did it! I found the key mistake I've been making in my manga drawings! It turns out, manga is all about the camera angles and point of views. Like in a movie, except drawn out on paper. Also, most pages have about 2-5 panels. Not the crazy 5-9 panels I tried stuffing in! I've also been drawing the head shape for both males and females the wrong way! And I promise I'll do my best to improve my work from here on! ^.^ *.* :3