Well, here's page two. I am very disappointed with that first panel. But I love how Dafne/Desire looks in that second one. And I think my second attempt drawing Sesshomaru was better than the first. Note to self, Sesshomaru does NOT have a square jaw. Well, enjoy. Can you guess who is in the bushes? And why does Dafne/Desire SMELL something (You probably already know though....)?
EDIT! I might get a tablet and MANGA MAKING MATERIALS... so I might start this over.