heh dont worry i wont kill you for that ... i feel really sorry for L but god story overall x

why would all the L fans want to kill you for this??? we all know that L had lost both his parents. this stories a lot nicer for L than the on I imagined, my L story is really depressing I've been contemplating posting it but it may be a bit risky. I like this one much more than mine.
p.s. i am the biggest L fan in my country well at least I don't see how it's possible to love L more than me

Overall, very nice. I wont criticize you for what you already know.
^-^ But who cares? You got the story across and did a great job with it!

@Dlkira:

Sorry but you're looking at the grammar fiend of the Earth righ here hahah. I'm glad you enjoyed it though.

To be honest I was eating through this and it didn't make me cry; but I wanted to T^T. I like a sad story, it reminds me of my past...wait I don't like my past... Great job; this was awsome, hope to hear more of your fanfics XD

I still think this is an awesome story!! I feel bad for L.

@sumirechan:

Oh ok ^^; I just thought you were mad at me for writing it. Glad to know I won't have a flaming mob outside my house any time soon XD Thanks for the comment!

~Soji

@SojiRem:

No, don't take it that way, I like it, but it's sad to me!I'm sorry, I never make myself clear, and now I'm about to faint, but before I do, I liked the story!!!*faints*

This is so sad but yet so good, it's so deep i love how you've done it.

@sumirechan:

I'm sorry did you not like it.......

*tears*poor L

Good story!! I tried not to cry.

@SojiRem:

I'm not after you cuz it was a sad but good story. very saddening, but good.

@ShizukoxIchimaru:

I was so emo after writing it, and I was kinda afraid to publish it and have all the L fans after me for it.

@SojiRem:

I-I-I'm still sad and its Saturday Dx
but yes thank you for writing it.

@ShizukoxIchimaru:

It made me emo to write it, but I am glad you liked it.

i am still crying and i read that half an hour ago... p-p-poor L-kun real good though... V_V

@Junketsu Bampaya:

Arigato I enjoyed writing about L-sama. I like him a lot. I've also written stories about Matt and others in my Death Note Stuff world

@XxKiraxCookiexX:

^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's always nice when ppl comment.

@Madison2294:

Thank you. I thought a lot about it before i wrote it. I like L's mommy....She's so kind

i love it!!! it fits perfectly and explains soooo much!!!

What a GREAT story!!! Poor L fulled w/sadness but then confidence n determination AWESOMENESS!!

@Magnus Lensherr:

Yes Soichiro is Light's dad...that was my intent anyway...

This was brilliant. It completely explains why L has such a thirst for justice and everything. Is Soichiro Light's father? Not sure how common the Yagami last name is around there. Nice work though ~ Has a sudden urge to eat some cinnamon rolls since I love pastries ~

Dranz

awww man im a guy and i almost cried but knowing how much my friends luv L they would've been in tears....thts awsome

That was so sad, I almost cried.. But I used up all my tears on another story.. Ehe.. Sorry.. But I really do like it! Such a sad story that hit me deep. Ah, why did he have to die..?

Something about depressing stories that I like...

@lazyweird1:

um....thank you? I had a dream about it, so I wrote it down and asked one of my friends if they would read it. She liked it and told me to publish it on theotaku so more people could enjoy it. I am glad that it went over so well. If you want more of my stories, read 'em from my world Death Note Stuff!!! I have to go so thanks again for giving me such a good review.

Oh. My. God. BEST L STORY EVER WRITTEN EVVVVVVVVVVER!!!!!! I loved this. Poor L..."God spare my child" That was so sweet! I loved the fact that L was inspired by Soichiro. Awesome way of tieing the characters together! You really capture L's past and personality wonderfully. A grand fic made even better up and beyong the call of duty. Loved it. *hugs you* My friends will adore this.

omg THAT WAS SO PRETTY and awesome i loved it ..it would explain L's love for sweets *claps* great job

OMG!!! that made me want 2 cry. But what also cought my eye was the officers name! Thats so sad!

Love it! I always thought something like that actually happened to L...

The story was cute and sad at parts makes me sad.
Sorry I didn't comment earlier, but it didn't come up I think because I was in camp.

Heya, just saw your story in the Fan Word submissions.

Tell ya what: if you can modify/edit this, put full line spaces between the paragraphs, I can publish this for ya.

Is that okay?

Poor L!That was a good story^_^