An Abstract Idea tsubasachro

My entry into PuppylovePyro's "Death" contest.
I know it's pretty long... But the lines are short and it reads fast
I want to see if anyone gets what Iam talking about...
I feel like I didn't make it too hard, so I guess I'll see.
PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!
My views always go up but nobody comments! TT.TT

I hope you enjoy!

~Tsu

An Absratct Idea

Never so found
As before one learns
The pure dew falls
So fresh in mourning
Only to dry in day
And disappear
So not to be seen

The colors swirl around
A confused mind
Solid walls
Tall tree trunks moving
Made of dark
Creek and moan
They walk upright

A sprinkler sprays
Wet drops miss the ground
Create a river
Moving down

Shoved from behind
Pulled to the side
Seven men
For seven handles
Heft the heavy
And carry the crate inside

Ashen planes on necks
Face to the front
And the doors open wide
All is dark within
A feeling-less feeling
Overwhelms
A young mind

The crowd moves within
Only to find
Nothing but air
With words
Of empty hope floating
Up to the sky

Hands linked
For reasons unknown
To a tired mind
Rows of blocks
The bees swarm to their hive
They sing their hymns of honey
To loll to sleep
Their anxious butterfly

Songs lifted up
To the tops
Of wooden pillars
To be set on marble alters

An abstract an idea
Presented for the unseen
Words are spoken
Unheard by all
Promises to be lost
With time that ticks

Movement again
In the reverse
The flock moves
Towards the quarry
Filled with valued stone
And people that do not move
Trapped in Medusa’s spell

An open mouth
Stands at the ready
To eat and naw
An oval forms around
The vast pit to the monsters stomach
A foe to this mind

Half seen shadows move
Lift, lift
Lower, lower
A twist and boom
The creature burps
As the food hits

Lilies white snow
Drop with sleet
To wash all the meal down
And heaps and heaps
In rhythm roar
The sound of earth hitting earth

A brick held
By one tall figure
Opens to reveal
A hidden agenda
And ears open
To take in small comforts

A mind is expanding
As it begins to understand
The mystery surrounding
A very strange day
Orbs that widen
And a mouth that drops
A window opens
A door that locks

The snail crawls from its shell
And wonders into the light
Then poof
What magic
Becomes as dust
To be lost
In swift wind
A child
Transformed
Becomes an adult

Author
tsubasachro
Date Published
12/28/09 (Originally Created: 12/02/09)
World
Tsubasachro's Thoughts
Category
Personal Fan Words
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