It looks better I guess. I think everything blends to much together. Still needs a lot of work. First of all,you don't really need the ghost images. I use them sparingly in my wallpapers or most of the time not at all. The text still bothers me. It sticks out like a sore thumb. text in wallpapers is a big pet peeve of mine. It either works or it doesn't. I think in this case,takes away from the wallpaper and doesn't help at all. Also use more contrasting colors. Too much of one shade of a color can also hurt a wallpaper. In this case it hurts it more than helps. Just saying.
~Judai
Beautiful wallpaper but I see several things wrong with it. First of all, the images are slightly off. They shouldn't be so faded into the background. Also the text takes away from the wallpaper. It looks slightly off. I'm sorry but I'm just trying to help you become a better wallpaper artist.
What I would suggest is maybe have two of the 3 images faded and the middle one standing out more. And the text a little smaller and less obvious. Hopefully this helps.
~Judai
artistcilla
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/11/13 | Reply
@Vanilla Cupcake :
your so welcome anytime :)
Vanilla Cupcake
Otakuite+ | Posted 05/11/13 | Reply
@artistcilla:
Thanks!!
artistcilla
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/11/13 | Reply
Really reallly like the quote and the art!!
21Emmz12
King of LLamas (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/17/13 | Reply
@Vanilla Cupcake :
You're welcome :D
C yaz!! ^^
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Klassic
Flame Haze Duelist Judai (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/16/13 | Reply
It looks better I guess. I think everything blends to much together. Still needs a lot of work. First of all,you don't really need the ghost images. I use them sparingly in my wallpapers or most of the time not at all. The text still bothers me. It sticks out like a sore thumb. text in wallpapers is a big pet peeve of mine. It either works or it doesn't. I think in this case,takes away from the wallpaper and doesn't help at all. Also use more contrasting colors. Too much of one shade of a color can also hurt a wallpaper. In this case it hurts it more than helps. Just saying.
~Judai
Vanilla Cupcake
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/16/13 | Reply
@Klassic:
OK! I'll work on it! Please tell me what you think of the new one when I post it up
Thanks for all your advice Judai-senpai, it helps a lot!
Vanilla Cupcake
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/16/13 | Reply
@Skyvie:
Your welcome!
Vanilla Cupcake
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/16/13 | Reply
@21Emmz12:
Thank you!
Klassic
Flame Haze Duelist Judai (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/16/13 | Reply
Beautiful wallpaper but I see several things wrong with it. First of all, the images are slightly off. They shouldn't be so faded into the background. Also the text takes away from the wallpaper. It looks slightly off. I'm sorry but I'm just trying to help you become a better wallpaper artist.
What I would suggest is maybe have two of the 3 images faded and the middle one standing out more. And the text a little smaller and less obvious. Hopefully this helps.
~Judai
Skyvie
Otakuite | Posted 02/16/13 | Reply
Thanks for thee dedication! i love it :D
Last edited by Skyvie at 3:46:40 PM EST on February 16, 2013.
21Emmz12
King of LLamas (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/16/13 | Reply
Very cute~!! ^___^
Love the quote!!
C yaz!! C:
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