Once upon a nightmare there lived a princess, her name was Rosalisa, she had a curse on her 18th birthday that she would become a vampire. On the other hand, the prince of darkness, Vladimir, has killed her parents(or so she thinks so).
She meets this mysterious guy, Adrian.
What does he want?
What will happen to Rosalisa as her life falls apart?
What will happen when a war breaks out?
Who is the real bad guy?
A story about a happy princess, she has love, money, and a great mom. But what happens when her mom and people around her are starting to be killed? Christian, Zander's father, is very suspicious, why is he always look like he's planing something big(hint hint)?
I plan on, this summer or this year to make my story a book. I've been re-writing and re-writing it over and over again, well at least 3 times, this is the 3rd time i have re-wrote it. What got it all started was that i was thinking about fairy tales. I love some with some good magic, evil magic, love, but what's with each one having a happy ending? The same thing over and over again, the prince saves the princess, they get married and happily ever after. Well i always loved to write so i decided, well i want to write a fairy tale story without the happy ending. The original plot was that Rosalisa was going to get captured by vladimir, the bad guy, and fall in love with him. An ultimate twist! Haha! Zander, her fiance, was going to get killed while Rosalisa was captured and there would be no prince to save the princess!!! Yay! But then I thought of new twists that no one will suspect, muahahahahaha. So all those tings i just typed about the original story, they're not going to have anything to do with the story >: ) You won't be able to figure who's the bad guy until it's to late and the war is an out brake! Well I do hope you enjoy the story, please comment and tell me what you think, i really want to know.
Oh and when you do commment please leave a number, like a rate:
1 being, Super Awesome!
2 being, good
3 being, eh, it's ok
4 being, ok, wait what? I don't get the plot, it sucks!
and 5 being, what the F***, this thing is horrible!
heheh, please rate, and tell me what to change and what would make this a better story, I really want to know what you peoples think!
