Info For a New Story

Here are the main characters to a new story I am doing. Let me know what you all think!

Characters
Name: Erin Suya
Age: 21
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 147 lbs.
Personality: risk taker, fun seeker, sporty, tom-boyish, reserved when it comes to her past,
Family: Parents, older brother who died
Other: In the past, she came from a very prestigious family, and she would have inherited everything from them. But, after a certain incident involving the death of her brother, she runs away to make a new life for herself
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Name: Joel Jedi
Age: 24
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 178 lbs.
Family: Parents- deceased, Younger sister, Jasmin, he takes care of (12)
Personality: laid back, loud mouth, will tell you exactly how he feels
Other: He holds a solid job as a teacher (really good at his job) His past is tainted with betrayals and lies that never ceases to haunt him.
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Name: Jasmin Jedi
Age: 12
Height: 4"9
Weight: 97 lbs.
Family: Parents- dead
Personality: hyper, always happy, nothing much keeps her down for very long
Other: Very well behaved. She really likes Erin, and considers her as the sister she never had.
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You'll meet the other characters in the story.

Plot
Basically, it'll center around Erin after the incident. She's in desperate need of a job and a place to stay. She ends up being taken in by a school teacher and his little sister. What happens when both of their pasts catch up with them? Follow their story through love, tragedy, and mystery.

What do you think?

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