The Manga Storyline Forum.
It’s where people who are more creative than I am help me develop characters and a better storyline for whatever manga I’m working on. If you’re allowed to talk here, you’ll already have been PMed. If you want to be allowed to talk here, PM me.

The Marcus Wolfe timeline is an alternate timeline of the Naruto universe with several important differences:

-Around the same time Orochimaru formed the Sound Village, several nin from Sunakagure disappeared, starting their own ‘Sky Village’. The Sound and the Sky villages inspired several nin from the Land of Water to form their own ‘Whirlpool Village’. The three villages have since then held some sort of alliance.

-Itachi, after murdering his family, hunted down fellow ANBU Okuri, the elder brother of Kiba. However, Okuri is the jiinchuriki of the Seven Tailed wolf, and Itachi only escapes his possessed form because of Okuri was attacked by the Inuzuka and Hyuuga clans. Both clans suffered heavy casualties, and Okuri fled to the Land of Snow.

-The Sky Village attempted to kill Gaara many times when he was about 8, fearing that he would one day harm them.

-Gaara stayed insane and friendless after the Naruto fight, but gained more control over himself and his murderous impulses.

- Gaara never became Kazekage. Sunakagure is without a single leader, governed instead by a council of old cronies.

- Gaara did not loose to Deidara because instead of fighting Deidara in the city, he was attacked in the middle of the desert.

And what am I working on now? Why, the manga with Gaara and Yua in it of course!

Okay folks, here’s the lineup of the Gaara manga Fan characters:
Yua: Red haired. (her hair has been dyed all her life to hide the fact that she was the result of an affair) Her bloodline limit allows her to see the ‘bloodlust’ (the will or desire to kill) of others. She abandoned the Sky village when her father, the Kage, went too far in trying to create stronger shinobi. She is primarily a taijutsu and weapons specialist, with some of her earrings and other jewelry being able to transform into weapons.

Shingo: He was told from birth that he and Yua were destined to wed, and he will never get over it. He is a constant embarrassment and a clutz. Can use Suffocating Storm jutsu.

Blind Seer: Read the picture I put up of him earlier……….

Takashi: One of 3 assassins sent after Yua. Uses Eye in the Sky jutsu, Summon Tengu, various thrown weapons, and general wind jutsus.

Mizuko: One of 3 assassins sent after Yua. Uses taijutsu and general wind jutsus.

Bushi: One of 3 assassins sent after Yua, he wants to kill Gaara for his gourd. Primarily a taijutsu specialist, he has DNA from Kimmimaru’s family as well as a few others (so his fight with Gaara will probably be deja vu). He once had contact with the Akatsuki, who offered him a gourd with a demon inside if he proved himself worthy. The offer still stands.

Onigiri: Gaara already killed him (the guy with the tentacle face?)

Now let’s talk!

More Ponderings

It would be very difficult not to come up with a cheesy name for that jutsu.
hmmmmm.......
Wind Style: Suffocating Storm Jutsu?
It's brilliant!
Back to you, Sandlover13......

Ponderings

Know my audience? With the exception of you, I have no idea whether it's boys or girls reading my manga. It's not like I can take a poll.

Or is it.......

Anyways, frozen blood's going on the shelf for some other project in the future.

Back to this manga, a jutsu that removes the oxygen from the air around an opponents head (now, see, that's what us guys come up with and admire)would be deadly, but I cannot think of a name.

Frozen blood?

Earth style:Sand EarthQuake(punch the ground, earthquake appears, sand comes
up, making Sand Coffin easier to use)
hmmmm........good jutsu, needs a better name.......Earth Style: Rising Buried Desert? Yeah, that works.

Ninja art:Chakra Needle Barrage(Needles made of chakra exploding)
hmmm......I suppose 3 shinobi using the technique simultaneously could provide 360 degrees of needle on one target.

And now my own thoughts:
What if you froze blood into the shape of a blade? Would it be stronger than normal ice due to it's iron content?

Wind style: Dragon storm jutsu!
(pretty self explanatory)

Ideas for Story

I have some cool ideas.
Justus:
Ninja art:Chakra Needle Barrage(Needles made of chakra exploding)
Fire Style:Fire Waterfall(fire moves like waterfall)
Earth style:Sand EarthQuake(punch the ground, earthquake appears, sand comes
up, making Sand Coffin easier to use)

That's all I have. Please continue the story.