Constructive criticism

I was really hoping to make an e-card with this, yet I don't have any programs or even an internet connection on my home computer. Oh, well. I hope you all enjoy it.

Whatever crawled up your ass and died?
You're depressed, there's something eating you inside.

Tell me about it. Just free your your little mind
Of the burden that has you in a bind.

Is there any more I can do?
You still look pale, your attitude blue.

The more you say, the more I know.
All those harsh feelings you now let go.

I dedicate this poem to all of my friends that are going through a hard time right now.

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