Since Omnia1 is lacking writers and I don't know his/her story well enough to join, I've decided to edit. I won't be doing this immediately, yet I have made a world for it.
So, my literature schedule is to read Inheritance (Paolini) while brushing up on first grade English. I will continue my English studies and I hope to be finished up to grade 8 this year and be up to date on how a sentence works, as it has been quite a while since I have been in grade school.
When I'm feeling comfortable with my literary skills at least reasonably so, I shall edit the story while continuing my studies. I'll probably edit several times, which means I'll probably know the story as well as well as anyone. As well, if I notice inconsistency, I shall note it in this world here, as well as sending a message to the involved.
Please be patient.