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Sins- A woman scorned(Ch.7)By Synthetic Heartbeat

-Sin faced her he stayed silent he looked at her dead in her blue eyes he could tell that the vampire he gave his heart to was furious as she stood there dressed in her black dress with frills at the end-
Sin: Ellie I... Ellie: Shut up ok!!! just shut up Gaara!- She only calls him Gaara when she was hurt or upset and demanded his full attention-
Ellie: Youre not going to talk your way out of this one not this time!!- she holds out her hand to him her eyes turn crimson red her hair also-Sin:....(she looks so beautiful in her black dress it gets me every time...)-Sin begins to levitate off the floor at her will after all she owned his heart. Ever since the night he let her feed off him they had been connected-Sin:Ellie you know you cant hurt me... You love me too muahhhhh!!!..-She sends him flying trough the tree behind her and then into the lake with such a force you could hear him hit the bottom of the lake-Ellie: You have no idea how hurt i was when you left me!!!...-she starts to cry-Sin lays at the bottom he felt pain but emotional was out weighing physical pain -
Sin: (I-I cant take much more of this.... She might just kill me. I know her weakness..I guess I have to use it.. She wont listen otherwise)

Sins- sins pursuation(Ch.6)By Synthetic Heartbeat

-Unknow to Wes, Rin had been growing vines near his legs trough out their conversation using the earth power she posses's trough fusing with the orb she grabed out of sin pouch using her tail.- Sin: restrain him rin.... Wes: what?....-the vines entwines his legs and arms holding him in place in a flash as Sin walks over to him slowly, pulling a small knife out from his booth placing it to his neck-Sin:...... I could kill you so easily Wes but.... I consider you as a friend I admire your devotion to Ellie.... So im going to leave you here to die if you dont tell me where she is.... So where is she? Wes: I wont tell you anything just kill me...-Wes was bluffing he knew Sin couldnt kill as easily as before when he was Dark Gaara which he learnt from overhearing Ellie.-Sin:hmm.... Wes: gh ahhhh!!!....ugh.-Sin stabbed him in his side without hesitation knowing he wouldnt die but be in extreme pain- Wes: WTF?!!....- Rin vanishes not wanting to watch this event- Sin: where is she Wes?! Wes:.......ugh she.... Shes-Wes looks up at him-Wes: Shes behind you?-He speaks weakly and Wes fades away as Ellie holds out her hand to him.-Sin:... (here we go...)

Sins-Ellie's slave(Ch.5)By Synthetic Heartbeat

Sin:......(i left Ellie alone to find peace of mind now im going back to get peace of mind and probably hers...oh well)-He suddenly stops in front of a lake Rin watches on leant up against his face tired from their journey which has been two days walking one day flying the next.- Sin: how about we stop here for a while Rin maybe we could catch some fis-Rins ear twitch hearing a small twig crack behind them and looks back spotting someone in the shadows, being a neko she could see him as clear as day he stood almost the same hight as Sin in a red coat black pants and black boots with black long hair and faded red eyes-Sin: fish we can continue in the....-Rin alerts Sin by tellepathy-Rin: (master.... We got company.) Sin:.....(sigh....where?) Rin: (right be hind you master) -Sin turns and calls him out- Sin: Please if Youre going to try to kill someone face them-a voice rings out-???: why cant you just stay away from my love Ellie? Why do you insist on hurting her and then crawl your way back into her life? Why?-He steps out of the shadows showing his face-Sin: .... Wes.... Shouldnt you be protecting Ellie? Youre crippling your chance of her loving you by being here.... Wes: Shut up Sin! Sadly I would love to be close to her but she knows Youre looking for her and that being the case I was sent to well hurt you... She hates you Sin for leaving! She doesnt want to see you or be found-Wes smiles he enjoyed saying that-Sin: hurt me?.... She will reconsider when she sees me, and you arent much of a treath to me Wes.... Maybe she sent you cause you were annoying her..... Rin: heheheh. most likely master-Wes frowns drawing his twin blades in anger- Wes: I will kill you for even thinking that-

Sins- peaceful burial (ch.4) By Synthetic Heartbeat

- he stops looking back at the village just a few yards away- Rin: something wrong master? -he places his hand into the small pouch on his left side pulling out a brown orb- Sin: I was thinking.... Those people.. They deserve a burial do you mind handling it? -she nods and takes the orb fusing it with her right arm-Rin: .... Ok earth orb fused!-Rin's hair turns a slight green and clothes become that of petals covering her body pink petals as she leaps high up into the air and holds out her hand to the village- Rin: unh... Haha Gaia quake!-a pulse wave hits the village and the earth quake's and splits a line in the middle rin then raises up both her hands causeing the floor to give way burying the village in a dusty rubble and clsing down on them-rin: Hahaha! peace of cake! -she lands down on sins shoulder-sin: good job Rin nicely done now lets go. Rin:yes master thank you.- she changes back and they set off to find Ellie.

Hidden love the voice of the heart By Synthetic Heartbeat

what is a rose?Is it not a flower born in different colors such as red, blue white and pink. Now what is your love? onto this day all any one knows mostly about it is thats its an emotion or a gift from god, now take a rose and give it to the person that makes you feel what you call love. Now tell me what is a rose now?Now it becomes a symbol of your love?Its not just a flower of different colors but it has become so much more in the hands of your beloved it becomes us. Now to some man if not most its still just a flower that women like for some unknown reason and it scores points for us in getting us in their bed but to a woman if not all women its what we keep hidden inside that they women mostly show all the time, its a piece of us that no one ever really gets to see often but that special person it is,the thoughtfulness,kindness,gentleness, affectionate,and the loving care that we have kept inside,and when you decide to give a woman a rose, think about what you are doing. for it could be the biggest lie you could ever tell without words.when you give your beloved a rose tell her nothing show her everything that you hold inside show her your love because words cant be heard as loud as your hearts actions.