I was on the bed thinking of my twin's OC Yurikami and i was like.... wow... she went to the akatsuki lolz. So i made this.... this is chiyoko... on the left and yurikami on the right. It was a bit random and the scanner killed the drawings so... yupp....
Chiyoko's notes: While i was on my brother's back, i was dreaming. Comfy as I was on my Oni-san's back, my dream had became a nightmare.
I was in the mansion again. I was in Shu-kun's tub, swimming in the tub filled with suds and rubber duckies. *squeek squeek* I love my rubber duckies. As I combed my white, flowing hair, I heard a knock at the door. "Who is it", I asked. When the door opened it was Oni-san in his human form. He was covered in dirt and blood. "Oni-san, why are you covered in blood and dirt", I asked him. Oni-san was smiling. "Well i was battling and im soooooo dirty. Can I take a bath with you?" My face became steaming red as he took off his shirt. I didnt even said my answer yet. "s-s-sure oni-s-san", I studdered. I turned the other way as he took off his pants and entered the big tub. Why am i acting this way? He is only my brother. As i was spazzing, Oni-san then washed my back. It felt good. It was alot of help for Oni-san to wash my back for me. Tand then he stopped. Why did he stopped. Oni-san then hugged me from behind. Steam was coming from my ears as his chest rubbed against my back. His hands were below my chest. "O-Oni-san!" Oni-san then whispered in my ear, "dont worry Nee-chan, just relax.... just relax." I did so, and it felt so good. I then fell alseep in the tub.
When i woke up, I found myself in a festival/carnival. I was wearing a different kimono. It was pink this time and it had alot of sakura petals on it. The bow in the back of the kimono was white and there was a sakura flower in my white, combed hair. I also wore white gloves. I looked around the place. How did I get here? Oh yeah, I'm dreaming. I let out a big sigh. "Why dontcha look so cute", a whispered voice said in my ear. I turned around ans it was Shu-kun. Still remembering my first kiss with him, i spazzed. "shu.. shu-kun?!" He smiled and took my hand. "lets go have some fun", he said. As we were walking, Shu-kun glanced at the tunnel of love. He smirked. "I think i found our first ride." My face became red as he was walking towards it. "One ticket please", the man in a uniform said. Shu-kun pulled out a ticket from out his pocket and then we went on the swan boat. "Shu-kun, these are for couples", I told him. Shu-kun leaned towards me, like he did when we kissed me, and said "arent we one?" I backed up to the corner of the boat. He was laughing. When the boat entered the cave, I was totally scared. Its not because of shu-kun, but it was the dark. "Shu-kun... im scared...", I said to him as I was clinging on to him. He then hugged me back, picked me up and placed me on his lap. "Dont worry Chi-chi, just relax.... just relax", he told me as he was stroking my head. I did so, and closed my eyes.
When I opened them, I found myself lying down...in a battlefield. It was a hot place, with lava spilling from a volcano and... it was like hell. As I sat up, I saw most of the biju I knew knocked out on the floor. Taki, Hachi-kun, Kai, Kiarah, Houmori, Yurikami, and even misa. They looked as if they were dead... THEY WERE DEAD!!! But wait... where is shu-kun and oni-san. I looked around in fear and saw Shu-kun fighting Deidara. The atasuki was here. Deidara was punching Shu-kun. Shu-kun tried to dodge but he couldn't stand a chance against Deidara's punches. One final blow from Deidara was enough to kill him. "SHU-KUN WATCH OUT!!!", I yelled to him. Shu-kun then turned around and noticed me. Then Deidara punched him out. Sending him to my area. Shu-kun then landed and was knocked out cold. "Shu-kun!!!", I yelled. I shaked him and yelled to him... but he was dead. Tears strolled down my eyes as I stared at the dead body. "No.... this cant be happening....", I said as i hugged him for the last time. Then the thought came to my head: Where's Oni-san?! I looked up and I saw him face to face with Itachi. Oni-san looked beat up as well. He struugled to get up, but Itachi kicked him down. "Its time for you to die", Itachi said. He pulled out his sword and was about to slice Oni-san in half.... until he spotted me. "I thought all the biju were dead already... oh well.. i got to kill the girl first.", Itachi mumbled. Oni-san heard him. Oni-san looked where Itachi was looking and yelled "ITACHI, THIS IS OUR BATTLE!! LEAVE NEE-CHAN OUT OF THIS!!" But i guess his begging made Itachi more and more anxious to kill me. "Nee-chan? This is my lucky day. Killing your joy and pride is worth it", Itachi said to Oni-san. Oni-san had a horrid look on his face. Itachi was running towards me. I got up and ran as fast as I could but Itachi was too fast. Itachi pulled out his sword and then slashed it. Blood slatted on my face... but it wasnt mine. Oni-san came out of nowhere and took the slash out for me. the slash cut him deep where his heart was. He then dropped to the floor... and he was dead. "OOONNNNNIIII-SAAAAAAN!", i yelled. I ran to him and tripped on him. Blood was everywhere on me. My tears were nonstop. "Why... why did you do all of this?", I screamed to Itachi. Itachi then pointed the bloody sword to my nose. "We are the atasuki. We hunt down monsters like you", he said as the whole atasuki clan surrounded me and oni-san. They gott closer and closer, laughing at me. Itachi was attemping to slash me. "Die".
I woke up... and i am on Oni-san's back. I smiled. I was happy that everyone was alive. "Oni-san.... thank you", I whispered.
After Onii-san told me he was going after a perverted trouble maker, I had no choice but to let him go. He looks so frustrated because of the kiss that shu-kun gave me. He needed time on his own I guess.
5 minutes after Oni-san left, I did. I needed alone time as well. Too much happened. When I was on the streets, I thought no one will love me again... then oni-san swooped me up and gave me a home, friends and most important... love. This is like a dream. I am very grateful for everyone, and surprisingly, especially misa. Without her, i wouldnt had become stronger.
As I was walking down the crowded streets, remembering everyone that came to my life, I remembered Shu-kun. I blushed and touched my lips. My first kiss, I thought to myself. I, then, snapped out of it. No no, I thought to myself. He was just drunk... he would have never did such a thing. I became very sad at the thought... i didnt know why. Maybe Im just so love- lonely.
I walked across the street and looked around. The lights were so pretty and the people were so happy. I saw many things. Firebugs, Shops, Minimalls, and alot of couples. I was walking pass a bridal shop and saw the most beautiful bridal dress i have ever seen. I wonder who will i marry...
There was a wedding going on. Church bells were ringing and people were cheering. I was coming out of the church with someone by my side. Human form, of course. It was a blur to see the person. When we reached to the bottom of the steps, the blur showed its face. It was.... Oni-san. Oni-san?He was smiling. I was surprised to see him in my daydreams. Then another person walked to me, kissed my hand and showed his face. Shu-kun? Shu-kun was holding my hand. Then came Hachi-kun, Hideki (He was in a human form for some reason), and Kai. I looked at all of them with a surprised look. I melted from all the handsome guys that surrounded me.
I woke up to reality. "NO NO NO NO!! I DONT LIKE THEM!", I yelled to the heavens. I ran from the bridal store. "WHY ARE THERE SO MUCH CUTE GUYS LIVING WITH MEEEEEEEEEEE!!", I screamed as I was running. As I ran, I saw a guy with white hair and blue eyes going into a shop, across the street. Hideki?, I thought. It did look alot like hideki but in a human form. I blushed. He looked so handsome. His blue eyes were soft like Hideki. Can it be him? I slammed into a brick wall. I fell to the ground with a loud "OOMPH". How can I have forgotton I was still running? I looked up and I still see the guy still at the window. His eyes were in awe as he was looking at a silver bell collar. I was in awe at how his eyes looked. He rushed into the store and got the collar. He then ran the other way. I can tell he was going somewhere. I want to see him again... someday.
Onii-san was going in the ring. It amazed me to see him in his human form... for the first time. He looked so handsome. My face was red. I can't think this way about my brother, I said to myself.
When Onii-san reached to the ring, they were both eyeballing each other. Onii-san gave a smirk. "Ive been waiting for a rematch", he said to shu-kun. Shu-kun gave a smirk as well. "*hic* yeah... ya ready to *hic* do this?", shu-kun said. Oni-san sighed and said, "well this wont be a serious battle since you are drunk... you are lucky enough that i wont kill you." Oni-san caught a glimspe at me in the crowd, smiled and then winked. I smiled and blushed. When the host said begin, I saw shu-kun and oni-san charging into each other. Then two security guards came in my way and yelled "NO DOGS ALLOWED".
Thats right, I said to myself. I was in my buji form still although my tails were tied in one so it looked like i was a husky. The security guards threw me out, leaving me outside so I cant see the match. I was upset because i didnt see the match, but 3 minutes later i saw shu-kun walking out with half the money and a bottle of sake he was drinking. "There you are *hic* chichi", he said walking towards me. "Your brother and I had a draw and i had to share the money..." He noticed that i was sad. "Wats *hic* wrong?" He said to me. I looked up to him and told him "Is this what you call fun? Just doing what you want to do and not what I wanna do?" Shu-kun then picked me up and told me "ok... what do you want to do?" I smiled.
Well first thing is first... dogs are not allowed in Las Vegas. "Lets go get some clothes", I told him. We stoped at a Japanese part of Las Vegas and shopped for some clothes. "How bout *hic* this one", Shu-kun said. He was still drunk but the sake that he won was turning him back to normal. He held up a red kimono with a matching red bow. It was beautiful but it was oversized but it didnt matter... I can just grow in it. I went into the dressing room, transformed into my human body, and tried it on. I looked in the mirror to try the bow on and examined myself. I looked like a cute little girl. My white long hair was a match with the red bow and the oversized kimono, although I couldnt see my hands... but i look pretty. I was so amazed that I screamed. "KAWAIIII!!!"
I came out the dressing room to show shu-kun. "How do you like it?", I said spinning around to show him. Shu-kun just stared with his face all red. "Chiyoko... thats your human form?" I nodded. He then had an evil smirk. "The dress looks nice on you. Lets go *hic* somewhere else." He dragged me out of the shop with out paying for it. Why is he in a rush, I thought to myself.
We then had some reall fun. In Las Vegas, it was like a carival. We played games, gamble, Shu-kun drank some more sake which turned him back to his hieght and his size in human form, and we went in rollercoasters. After all of that fun, We settled down to get something to eat.
We sat down at a table and ate. I had some cotton candy while he had a hotdog. He ate it all in one bite and continued to drink his sake. I took it slow on the cotton candy because it tasted so sweet. "Yum!!", I yelled in delight as i ripped part from part at the cotton candy. "Shu-kun, you should taste this cotton candy! It's good!", I said to him. Shu-kun was staring at me. I didnt relized how handsome he looked, I thought to myself as I was looking at him. He looked as handsome as Onii-san. Shu-kun then got out of his chair and knelt down by me. He then placed his hand on my face. "You know I like it *hic* when you call me 'Shu-kun' doncha?", he said as he ran his finger down my chin. I just looked at him. "Uhh... i didnt know that but uh... i..." I was studdering because shu-kun was touching me and getting closer. "Your so *hic* cute" he said as his face got closer. I was blushing. "Shu-kun what are you doing?", I said. He then placed one hand on my cheeck and the other arm was holding me. "What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas", he smirked. His face got closer to mine. "Shu-kun i d-" We then locked lips.
"SHUKAKU YOU BASTARD!!!", we heard an angry voice behind us.
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"We're gonna *hic* have some fun!" Shu-kun answered. Fun.... I wonder what his definition of "fun" was.
Shukaku was walking with me on his head, when I noticed a big crowd of men, screaming and shouting and wooting and what not. "What is going on over there", I asked Shu-kun. Shu-kun smirked with a little drool coming out. He was laughing. I was getting a little freaked out. He put me down and walked over to the crowd. As he pushed everyone from the crowd out his way, I seen a desk that a man was in with signing up papers on it. Shu-kun slammed his hand on the desk and yelled "SIGN ME UP FOR *hic* THE WRESTLING MATCH!" I sighed. Wrestling match... of course, I thought to myself.
When Shu-kun was signed up for the competition, I waited in the front row with a crowd of people for the match to begin. So this is his definiton of fun, I thought. Annoyed as i am, I couldnt be mad at shu-kun for this. After all, he is drunk. The light dimmed and the crowd went wild. Its time for the competition to begin. "Wellllllllllcome one and all... to the LAS VEGAS WRESTING MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATCH!!", the host yelled to the crowd. The crowd screamed louder. "Ok in this corner... we have the bumpkin that is representing Alabama... BILLLYYYYYY BOOOOOOOOOOB!" The host's voice was starting to get annoying. "And in this corner, representing SHUUUUUUUUKAKUUUUUUUU!" I popped up and saw Shu-kun waving to everyone. He is still drunk. "LET THE MATCH.... BEGIN!!!"
Billy Bob was kind of scared of how Shu-kun looked. Shu-kun walked to him and said "Boo". Billy Bob ran out of the ring with all his might. I collasped to the floor -_-'. "RING OUT!!! AND THE WINNER IS SHUKAKU!" The crowd went wild. "That was quick", I said. "Lets bring out the next competetor", the host said.
After 15 minutes, Shu-kun was in the finals. 30 men was fought, had a ring out, or KOed in 30 seconds. "Wow... Shu-kun can be tough when drunk....", I said. The Final competator was coming out. "Now for the last competator.... He representing Japan as well... give it up people... FOR KYUUBI!!!" I popped up. Onii-san was going to fight!!