Death of Saki's Beloved

The darkness of the night enshrounds her soul
Her beloved laying in her arms with the stake peircing his chest; a hole.
The Werewolf stands behind her; a grin on his selfish, perfect face.
A diamond drop slides down her anguished cheek, and lands on the Vampire's ruined shirt lace.

The Werewolf reaches down to consol her
But her terror mounts and she kicks him; sending blood into his fur.
Her loved one stirrs, and stands with a sneer;
Laying a hand over his left side chest; "You do realise the organ is here?"

(Yeah, I know it sucks. This is for a challenge; but I made it to incorperate what I am going to draw/write in my manga "English Vampire". Saki (the girl) has had a spell cast on her by Konoge (the werewolf) and she is going out with him. But she loves Tenpess (the Vampire) and her conscience rebells against the spell and she is going through an agony that most could never imagine. Seeing this, the werewolf decides to kill Tenpess instead of lift the spell on Saki and lose her. But he is failing anatomy; he stabs the stake into the right side of Tenpess's chest; so he didn't kill him. The werewolf takes Saki to their school; to the first place she met Tenpess and she is still with turmoil inside her. When Tenpess arrives; the werewolf is trying to hug her, but she's pushing him away. The werewolf starts becoming violent, and she's being battered. Tenpess walks up to him and, from behind, kicks him in the head; sending him flying to the ground. Tenpess then takes the stake out of his chest and says; "You need to study anatomy more; the heart is on the left side." He drops the stake and advances on the werewolf. And that's all you'll know for now...!^^)