(fan gal me)- OMG L still dies. no no no. someone think of a way for L to live WHAAAAAA

(normal me)- nice story very interesting good way of catching kira

(fan gal me)- no it's not L still dies

(normal me)- he dies happy though, he knows he caught the real kira and that justice will be served.

(fan gal me)- WHAAAAAAAAAA

(me)- LOL I think you can see whats going on in my twisted head from that. I'm at war with myself TEE HEE

Very nice! Reminds me of the Death Note live action movie....Only better. Great disciptions and writing over all. I loved the allusion to the Bible (Huge Christian) cause I rewatched the actual episode the other day and thought of just that! It's great that you're taking a small interest in the liturature aspect of the Bible, even if you don't believe. ^.~
~Chero~

I really don't like fanfiction, but this was really great! There's a nice balance between action and description, you just nailed it. And I love the final words, "the bells were silent" is really a poetic way to end a story. Endings are usually abrupt, but yours in just right. Loved it.

Good luck in the contest, I really hope you'll win. And great to find another atheist around here that knows about the Bible. *high fives*

@Ryu:

oh, oops. Atheist aren't really the type to read Bibles are they? I'm a Christian, so does that mean we can't be friends, I don't have to preach to you. I'm even friends with a person who's like a nothing, they've never even heard of a Bible.

I really liked this story!! I also like the fact that you put the similarity of the Bible with L washing his betrayer's feet, like Jesus did with Judas. You must be a good Christian.