If you know it looks sloppy then why dont you fix it???

Nice.... what color tool that U use? It's looks crayon or Oil color? U have great idea. She looks awesome. But may I give U some suggestion? Black and Red is contrast color. U should pay more atention if U want to put them in same place (like her hair). U made a little mistakes on it. So, her hair not looks natural. But over all, U do a great job!!

I'll tell you one thing for sure that's a lot better than I could do on the computer. I am really sucky at drawing on the computer. Any way it looks really awesome.

O..M...G THAT IS SO COOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!! AND YOU USED MY OUTFIT!!!!!!!!! T.T I.. am so ...proud... AND YOU COLOR SO GOOD!!!!! XD ~Ki-chan~