this is really great. i agree that this also would be good colored. and nice little caption touch at the bottom

Fine... I will try my best to color it. Only really two colors are needed. All I have are colored pencils..>_

Don't "screw coloring!" Please do. I think you would be a great colorer. Do it! Coloring may be a pain in the astro turf but I really think it is worth it. Keep it up!