well, i think that this came out very well. I love it! i love his face, and the clothing is well done too. the shirt turned out niiiiice. ^///^ i like it. you also did a great job with the coloring and shading. ^^
i also think that you did a good job on the background. the only thing i see is that his hands and arms could use a little bit of work. mostly the hands though. also, the proportions of his body are a little bit off, but that can be a pretty hard thing to do.
overall, i think you did an excellent job! just work on the limbs and proportions a little more, and it'll be perfect. ^^ keep up the great work!
♥Amaya
I think it came out well! I think this is the first drawing I'm seeing by you. The wrinkles in the clothes are very well done. The coloring is nice too. I really like that shirt design. I can only imagine how fun that was to draw every line...heh heh.
I would recommend working on the hands a bit. Hands should be very relaxed and natural feeling since hands are a great way to express emotion.
Anyway, good job and I look forward to seeing more!
Lots of talent for your age, Blackmailer-chan X3
Oi oi, where to begin. For the things I know, your shading and coloring is just wonderful. I absolutely adore how you did his right arm (our left his right X3)I can't color worth beans ;__; you have lots of patience to do this X3
Not to mention, you have a knack for outfits. The arm things (can't remember the name =___= of what they're called) are very very interesting X3 I love 'em! And the pants are good too, I love how you did the folds correctly. Wrinkles are annoying to place X3
As for any complaints, just watch the anatomy a little. These things improve with practice and age, so, you've already got a headstart on other aspects X33 keep at it and you'll be a pro in no time.
If you wanna really really get better fast, just try to copy pics of shirtless men (which can be both a fun and educational quest which actually works).
Also, just a reminder that works for me usually. The thighs should be the same length of 2/3 the torso, can be a little longer for a visually attractive appeal, but preferably that long. Yours is roughly 1/2, which is okay in realism, but it would look a little better if it was 2/3 ^^ cause your style is different ^^
Ohh, and I love the whole theme X3 Very smexy.
Better add more pictures
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