I find it funny how common it is for fan-lovers of Sesshomaru to look like they are related to him : That aside, I really think this could use some work. It looks like you have a good grasp on your proportions, but your line art needs work. It�s nice in some places, but in others it looks sketchy and irregular. My suggestion is to take more time when inking and don�t rush through it. And don�t forget, the outline of the image is where the thickest lines should be. The thick lines will bring the image out more and give it more life. Next, your coloring could use some work as well. Try using more than one pencil/crayon/whatever and shade in some shadows. And instead of coloring in straight stokes (as what it looks like) color in small circular motions. It will help give a smoother result. Last thing, hair is not made of concrete. Sesshomaru's hand should be against her back, not just touching her hair like it's apart of her flesh. It just makes it look awkward. Nice picture, just needs work. I hope my criticism helps some.

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Reikimaru