Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/02/07 | Reply
Oh wow...it's your number one piccy so I won't say anything also since Panda-san practically said everything in a little more blunt way than I expected...
but anywhos..CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need to fave this...
And now for something COMPLETELY DIFFERENT.
I'm going to get my ass kicked for this, but you said you wanted honest commentary, and... well, I'm through with being nice to people on this site. :3
Kokkoii... I know you hate to use an undersketch, but seriously, you really should. Drawing straight out like you have been hasn't been working out for you at all, and it's about time you try something that the people who've been deemed "good artists" do frequently.
The proportions are all horribly off, even if she's supposed to be a chibi-ish character in this. I can't tell where her joints are at all; they seem to be floating freely on her body. Her neck just sort of floats off into nowhere behind her hair, her shoulders seem to be attached to it instead of her torso as they should be, and her head isn't very well defined at all. The hands are really off, too; they look like her wrists have sprouted fingers... but there'd no defined "wrists" really, so it's more like her arms have fingers wiggling on the ends. Again, I understand it may just be part of the chibi-ish style you've used for this particular picture, but most, if not all, of the pictures you've posted seem to be like this.
http://www.bakaneko.com/howto/figure/anatomy/index.html
There's a lot of text there, and I know how much you dislike reading, but seriously, you ought to. There is no WAY you'll be able to get into an art school if you don't even understand the basics of drawing the human body. Anime-style drawing and realistic drawing aren't that different when you get down to it, and that page explains it nicely.
http://www.bakaneko.com/howto.htm
That's the rest of the tutorials on that site. While I don't really like the style she uses, she explains how figures work pretty well. Again, there is a lot of text involved, but if you want to improve, reading that would be very helpful.
http://artistshospital.deviantart.com/art/Library-reference-Humans-24705651http://pandabaka.deviantart.com/art/How-I-draw-char-pose-32796586http://www.cablenet.ne.jp/%7ejapanime/tutorial/fbodymain.htmlhttp://uchuucacahuate.deviantart.com/art/Drawing-Tutorial-009-Feet-3883844
I suggest you go through ALL of those links, plus most of them in that Library Reference post before you post your next picture.
ISH SOOOOOOO CUTE!!! omg! kyuuuuuu!!!
tha coloring ish totally awsome!!!
it looks soft but cute and bubbly at tha same time!!! KYU!!!
*VOTES AND FAVS!!!*
♥ Ookami-chan!!! ^_^
Hey, hey! You DID get featured! ^o^
And you JUST returned!!
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
I love the outfit ^^
The colors you used look great together :)
I love the way you draw her hair ^^
Her hands are lookin' pretty awesome too :P
Yes, work on what you know you need to improve on ^^
Keep it up >3 and congrats on making it featured again.
w000t! ;3
You know I always vote x3
OMG! This is soooo adorable!!! :3 I love it Koii-Chan!!!!
Her foot is a little weird, but it's better than what I would've done XD
I love the little glowy-thing she's holding! I wanna hold one! XD
And her wings are really really pretty too! And her dress and hair and lacies.
I like her eyes too! And her expression. Okay, I like everything. :3
Great Job!!
--Katie
Sold my soul (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/15/07 | Reply
O______O
....
....
DUDE.
I FUCKING LOVE YOU.
THIS IS SO CUTE.
I LOVE IT.
IMMA GONNA HAVE TO CALL YOU AND THROW A PARTY FOR YOU XD
THIS ROCKS.
THANKYOUUUUUU !!!!!!
*tackles and hugs*
I will be the first to comment here and tell you again... along with the squealing.
SO CUTE ^-^
And I love the soft pink color.
Again, I like how you did her hair and eyes ^^
I bet Cherri will love this.
*votes*
~Sora
The Skullboy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/15/07 | Reply
wow,this is so cute I wonder why it hasn't had a comment or vote yet,but now it does^^she's gonna love it,I can't see why she would't^^this is soo cute!^^
~Melly
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