cute outfit design and character!! ^-^ nice pose!! and whoa!! what a VERY cool constructive critic! nice done! ^-^ but i see you're improving anyways! ^-^
Akatsuki Elite Member: Ichati
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/09/07 | Reply
Thankies Panda-san! And this was drawn before you gave me your advice on Kyra's piccy, so that's why things are a bit messed up.
No..it didn't look that way before, I had an inking problem so that's why the right hand looks so messed up...
Anyways..I'll check out the site! Thankies for the advice! ^^
And now for the critique bit.
Again with the legs. That "six head rule" I mentioned really does work. I suggest you try it.
Her right hand is very, very messed up. It looks like you drew her glove first, then tried to tack on her fingers later on. Her arms are also lacking in length and elbow joints.
That leads me to wonder about how you set up your drawings... do you set them up with a stick-figure-like under sketch thing first or do you just draw straight out? Setting things up can be very helpful.
http://artistshospital.deviantart.com/art/Library-reference-Humans-24705651
Chocked full of referencey-goodness and other tips and tricks.
That is so cute and really cool at the same time >w<
I adore your coloring and line art Sayura-chan.
I really like her pose and the weapon.
I'm glad you're scanner is fixed now ^^
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~Sora
ZOMG!!!! THATS SO KAWAII! THANK U SO MUCH SAYURA!!!! *HUGS* The pose is magnificent!! everything is magnificent!! OwO thank u!! I love it! *hugs!* im srry i couldn't see earlier, i was working on my project, and i still have to do more T-T it's due Wednesday so I'm gonna try finishing it today since we always have lotsa home work on weekdays XP Thank u so much again for the nice gift! *vote fav and more hugs!!!*
Shes so CUTE.
She seems good enough DX as long as she dosn't have some. evil annoying rip off spirit beast in her. DX.
-Hugs Tsuki!!- Shes cute~
Another Blue Ninja~!
Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never give up
Live it, Learn it, Love it
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That looks really awsome Sayura-chan!^^ I really like her pose and her weapon's design. :D Sayoko-chan will love this! Great job!^^
~Ganbatte Kudasai~
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--Sakurie
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i luv it!! its sooo cute!! u did great with the pose and the coloring!!
u rock!!
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