Queen of theO � (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/07/08 | Reply
Ha~ I like how you did the hair since it has some movement =3 and it is not dull x3 it also seems like it has some hi-lites in it. I could never get my noses as slightly penciled in like that but good try ^^ you should try to make it a little more outlined. hmmm, the eye is what is bothering me though =O You might want to make halfly smaller or so... and you could always 'graph' out a picture before you draw it just so you can get your anatomy and proportions right! =3 That's what my teacher had us do in Exploratory Art last year and it certainly did help.. x3 Hm, the shirt could a little more folds or more realism to it if you made it look like the shirt did not just fit onto his skin or something xD I think your neck looks okay... just make it a little thinner next time =3
Oh, about the eye too, move it to a little more to the right. (your right xD) make his eyebrow a little more realistic by not having it so big and draw curved lines like this:
..... so it resembles more like an eyebrow and it makes it texture-y in a way like that ^___^ Did you use a reference? You could always use references of your famous stars or something if you'd like =3 hmmm, the lips are also need of a little more widening.. and don't forget about lip anatomy too! you just need a little few more lines to make out the lip outline ^^ Study people's faces more! Or even, study your own face too! ^____^ It will help out a lot with anatomy and shapes of a human face =3 Good try, overall and I hope your next drawing will come out even better! I hope this advice helped x'D Sorry for the long comment ;^;'
P.S. You should shade your drawings in more so you can make it even more realistic! It would help out on parts like the nose, the lips, and the neck! ^____^
Last edited by Michiyo Shimizu at 2:02:46 AM EDT on September 7, 2008.
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Duuude, this is like, super awesome! Imagine now if you colored it how awesome it'd look. Guess it doesn't look exactly realistic, still looks kinda anime-ish, but you've created an awesome sorta balance, y'know! Me loves it!
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Otakuite | Posted 10/07/08 | Reply
aww that is so adorable ^^
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/14/08 | Reply
Maybe more detail on the face and dlothing but awesome work at this one.Hurray for the realistic style keep them comming ^^ .
Angel
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Otaku Legend | Posted 09/08/08 | Reply
It still looks a buit cartoonish, but it's cute nonetheless. I really luvs it! He looks so innocent
XOXO
kukki-chan
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/07/08 | Reply
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it's ok dont worry about it... n-n' im sorry im afraid i dont know her,,, D:
kukki-chan
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/07/08 | Reply
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thanks!!! n-n' and i dont think i know anyone with that name,.. what name is familiar to her?
Bluesen
Queen of Skaia (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/07/08 | Reply
Kukki-chan, I love it! Seriously, your realistic drawing kick mine's butt-- It's rly CUTE :D Luv the hair!
Luv luv it~!
-*Blue*
Last edited by Bluesen12 at 2:08:59 AM EDT on September 7, 2008.
Michiyo Shimizu
Queen of theO � (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/07/08 | Reply
Ha~ I like how you did the hair since it has some movement =3 and it is not dull x3 it also seems like it has some hi-lites in it. I could never get my noses as slightly penciled in like that but good try ^^ you should try to make it a little more outlined. hmmm, the eye is what is bothering me though =O You might want to make halfly smaller or so... and you could always 'graph' out a picture before you draw it just so you can get your anatomy and proportions right! =3 That's what my teacher had us do in Exploratory Art last year and it certainly did help.. x3 Hm, the shirt could a little more folds or more realism to it if you made it look like the shirt did not just fit onto his skin or something xD I think your neck looks okay... just make it a little thinner next time =3
Oh, about the eye too, move it to a little more to the right. (your right xD) make his eyebrow a little more realistic by not having it so big and draw curved lines like this:
..... so it resembles more like an eyebrow and it makes it texture-y in a way like that ^___^ Did you use a reference? You could always use references of your famous stars or something if you'd like =3 hmmm, the lips are also need of a little more widening.. and don't forget about lip anatomy too! you just need a little few more lines to make out the lip outline ^^ Study people's faces more! Or even, study your own face too! ^____^ It will help out a lot with anatomy and shapes of a human face =3 Good try, overall and I hope your next drawing will come out even better! I hope this advice helped x'D Sorry for the long comment ;^;'
P.S. You should shade your drawings in more so you can make it even more realistic! It would help out on parts like the nose, the lips, and the neck! ^____^
Last edited by Michiyo Shimizu at 2:02:46 AM EDT on September 7, 2008.
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noirassasin
Compulsive Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/07/08 | Reply
i...like it... love the hair. >< so cool. that must use alot of hairspray to stay like that.
=)
~noirassasin
kukki-chan
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/06/08 | Reply
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thanks!! n-n *hugs*
Mushroom-chan
Otakuite | Posted 09/06/08 | Reply
Duuude, this is like, super awesome! Imagine now if you colored it how awesome it'd look. Guess it doesn't look exactly realistic, still looks kinda anime-ish, but you've created an awesome sorta balance, y'know! Me loves it!
kukki-chan
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/06/08 | Reply
thanks♥ my scanner kinda ruined some things but..
at least you like it n-n