Okay. Well, don't take this too seriously, I critique everyones artworks. And it's to help make you a better artist, not that you aren't already a great one. Soooooooooooo......
The face needs a bit of work. I really love the way you colored the eyes, I really do. But there should be....... some, well, actual lines or so at the bottom and top of the eyes maybe, and I believe she is missing eyelids. Her nose needs a bit of work..... Noses don't just go straight down then to the side. they have a bit of a curve.
Also, the hair needs some more depth. It looks a bit too solid to me. Maybe try to draw individual strands. :)
The hands need work as well. I suppose the one that is put into a fist is done pretty well, so no need to change that one too much.
The other hand needs work though. The fingernails look a bit like bubbles, you could fix that by making them slimmer, and stick them out farther than the actual fingers.:)
The clothes are done rather well, no problems with that.
Except....... Her bottom is showing. Her actual butt cheecks are showing almost completely. xD And her underwear is freaking me out. D; I mean, that line down the middle..... makes it show MUCHHH too much. >.<''
I would suggest putting her skirt over her underwear.
Oh gawd I looked this over and the post was huuuuge.xD Well, over all, this is a pretty well done picture, and you should keep up the good work. ;D
Air-Dragon
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@oliviaxoxo:
haha, its all good.
oliviaxoxo
Otakuite | Posted 08/25/10 | Reply
@Air-Dragon:
D: I'm really sowwyyy. D| I sounded like a total jerk.
I really am sorry, I didn't mean to. xD I really like the drawing.
Air-Dragon
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/13/10 | Reply
@oliviaxoxo:
Well it was supposed to be kind of gawdy... since it was a vogue cover.
Im not very detailed but im working on it, i have a short tensionspan when drawing, so sorry.
Thank you very much for the comment.
oliviaxoxo
Otakuite | Posted 07/19/10 | Reply
Okay. Well, don't take this too seriously, I critique everyones artworks. And it's to help make you a better artist, not that you aren't already a great one. Soooooooooooo......
The face needs a bit of work. I really love the way you colored the eyes, I really do. But there should be....... some, well, actual lines or so at the bottom and top of the eyes maybe, and I believe she is missing eyelids. Her nose needs a bit of work..... Noses don't just go straight down then to the side. they have a bit of a curve.
Also, the hair needs some more depth. It looks a bit too solid to me. Maybe try to draw individual strands. :)
The hands need work as well. I suppose the one that is put into a fist is done pretty well, so no need to change that one too much.
The other hand needs work though. The fingernails look a bit like bubbles, you could fix that by making them slimmer, and stick them out farther than the actual fingers.:)
The clothes are done rather well, no problems with that.
Except....... Her bottom is showing. Her actual butt cheecks are showing almost completely. xD And her underwear is freaking me out. D; I mean, that line down the middle..... makes it show MUCHHH too much. >.<''
I would suggest putting her skirt over her underwear.
Oh gawd I looked this over and the post was huuuuge.xD Well, over all, this is a pretty well done picture, and you should keep up the good work. ;D