@ChiPolVee:

No problem, you totally deserve the kindest of comments!!! This is so amazing!! Oh of course^^ I hope I didn't sound mad at Clue O_O" She gave good advice! I just thought the ears here werent too bad, and actually very cute~
I also saw your re-upload with the sketch you edited on picmonkey.com and I'm so glad its working for you!!! <3
Totally!!! Its adorable, Luke is so lucky <3
Luke: *group hug!* i will name that son. very soon. XD

@crystal fantasia:

Lol of course, I know! ^^ Yeah, I know what u mean :) I used to draw small ears and its really important to get them right... But I just thought they looked ok here, since they're really cute <3

@ChiPolVee:

I'm just trying to help is all.

@Sarasface:

Oh thank you so much~ <3

This is so cute and sweet!

@crystal fantasia:

I know, the eyes bugged the heck outta me but I gave up because I kept changing and re-changing and changing them again and I didn't want to destroy the whole picture because I really like the little girl and the hair so I stopped trying... Thank you for the words of advice though~ I'll do better next time~ <3

@MangaKid:

Meeee!! Thank you so much for your kind words~ I was so confused when you said Clue... then I remembered~ But I like knowing what people don't like so I can fix it later~ So this doesn't bother me a little~ <3 I'm really glad you like this though and thanks for the web address~ I'll look into that~ <3
Originally Luke was going to be in this and their son but I scraped it because I liked just the girls and the family photo will come later~ Plus it was nice to do for father's day~ You know~ ;3
Gabriella: *grabs Luke and nameless son and hugs everyone close* FAMILY!!

@MangaKid:

I really am not trying to be mean, It's just with the ears it's actually stated that to get the proportions correct on a face for the eyes and noes spacing right the ears need to be the right size.

@ChiPolVee:

It was mostly with the eye's when you look at the shading in the eye that is showing you lose to pupil. But it is good. Just keep working I know you can do it!

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS IS TOO PRECIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Celeste and Gabby look adorable!!! I love how you drew them, I LOVE THIS!!! Their hair and expression and the way you show their bond is so special and cute!!! I can't stop looking at it! OH I totally love the heart in Gabby's eye too, and again her blush and the shading you did is incredible!!
Luke is so proud~
As for a critique, I read what Clue said and she has some good points... I think she's right about not showing the eye when the hair covers it and making the shading darker (tho I really like it soft! but you can always upload your work to picmonkey.com after your scan and edit the contrast^^ Still, I do really like it how it is now <3) But as for the ears, I don't see a problem with them... Small ears can look painful xD but these are really cute and in your style~ I like it, but you can always experiment!
Your pose work, as always, is very good <3 I feel like group hugging them!! Luke, you go hug them too!!
Thanks so much for the lovely dedication and artwork, its so beautiful!!!!!!!
Also, your lettering at the top of the picture is perfect!

@crystal fantasia:

No no no, don't worry, I know you're not being rude, I asked for this~ I hadn't even thought of the ears... Thank you. I'm not good with ears and this was a totally new angle for me... But I realize now the shaking killed it, my last few haven't been too bad with the shading going through the scanner but I guess this one... oh well... Thank you very much, I'll keep trying to get better~ Thank you~

It looks nice I'm not trying to be mean or rude I'm just trying to help but the ears on both or them are way to small for the size of their heads. For the eye's problem I find if you do have a character with hair over one eye and the eyes are not matching up the way you want them too I would suggest not showing the eye through the hair. not even the outline of the eye that is supposed to me covered by the hair. Also don't be afraid to go darker with what is supposed to be black in the image a scanner will kill the shading if you don't go darker. Again I'm not trying to be mean or anything I'm just trying to give you some constructive criticism.

@kita mikichi:

Ah! Thank you~ Yup yup~ Spoilers~ And a Father's Day thing~

SPOILERS!!! XD

This is so sweet!