It'd look more like Jon if you'd colored the hair... I think the darkness and slight overcrowding-sense of the pencil lines of the Obata-fied hair makes it look too dark.
WAH awesome!! Obata's style s one of my favourites in shonen manga! And yeah, he did Bakuman :) I love that manga!
Your imitation of his style looks so cool! The comparison is neat, I love both your style and his^^ This is really inspiring to see you posting art :D
elricbrothersfan
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/16/13 | Reply
@Keba Si Rota:
*deflating balloon sound* Waat-waaat-waaaaaat...
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/16/13 | Reply
@elricbrothersfan:
You know what? You're right. That did cross my mind. But I still didn't color it.
Call it karma. Call it luck. Me, I just don't give a... BOUNCE!
elricbrothersfan
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/16/13 | Reply
It'd look more like Jon if you'd colored the hair... I think the darkness and slight overcrowding-sense of the pencil lines of the Obata-fied hair makes it look too dark.
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/16/13 | Reply
@MangaKid:
Thank you for the sweet comment! Glad you feel inspired.
I'm glad you clarified the whole Bakuman thing. I want to read it, but I have so many other manga on my list that I haven't gotten to yet.
Call it karma. Call it luck. Me, I just don't give a... BOUNCE!
MangaKid
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/16/13 | Reply
WAH awesome!! Obata's style s one of my favourites in shonen manga! And yeah, he did Bakuman :) I love that manga!
Your imitation of his style looks so cool! The comparison is neat, I love both your style and his^^ This is really inspiring to see you posting art :D