like i've said, love your style. ^^ you've got a lot of potential. there are only a few things i'd like to point out... 1. they are too skinny. the waist is smaller than the head. :O that is not humanly possible...someone could topple over if their waist was smaller than their head. 2. boobs are too big. XD well, at least, one for each of them are compared to the other. on joy (this is facing the direction joy is facing), her right boob is too big compared to her left one. for pride, it's the opposite. hope you understand what i mean. xp 3. hands don't worry so much about this issue, EVERYONE has TONS AND TONS AND TONS of trouble with hands. i still do myself. what i do is i put my hand in the same position and copy it. of course, i'll have to use my drawing hand eventually, and that would be difficult inter-changing between positioning my hand in the right way and drawing. but i just do my best. that's my suggestion for you, but it might not work. i dunno, it might just be me. but give it a try and let me know how it helps. ^_~ wow...long comment. XD

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