well, if you look past the lazyness of the wings, it's acctually a pretty good picture. i just need to look up some refs for that kind of wing position. don't mind me, i'm lazy to the extreme. i can't seem to finish pictures. this one i was going to put a bg and everything :] critisism very welcome. btw: if you are reading my 'manga' i have a lot of ideas i'm sorting through, but i'm to darn lazy to ink it or anything. i'm considering just tracing it with pen and scanning it in and calling it good. :p