Scene was from a RP, but what inspired me to draw it was the song I used in the profile titled "How Long". ( http://profiles.yahoo.com/resilient_autonomy ) A friend of mine, a few days ago, announced to us all that she's selling her computer as a last-ditch effort to get money to pay for bills. She said the guy she was selling it to was picking it up the next day and wanted to do a drama-based roleplay with us to remove her character from the story instead of letting her just randomly vanished. We decided there was going to be a fight and she was going to get killed...and that's as far as planning went. So, we rolled with the idea and let it form as we played. My Blues got fired at (for being cocky...) and it hit the side of his face. Shattered his shades/visor/sunglasses (which gives me an excuse to create a new look for them) but also damaged his right eye...xD; He can't see out of it now, but it can probably be repaired. Needless to say, she took the opportunity to rescue Blues and eliminate her character when Blues got advanced on. Hence, shock. Anyway. I'm looking for ideas, and that's why I'm submitting this. I want opinions on where the light source should be, and if I should put the girl in there or not. (And yes, I'm aware that his scarf should be tucked in.)