Well, this will eventually be my entry for gaaragirl911's lyrics challenge. I was kinda hoping I could get a little feedback form you guys before I started finalizing everything.

A couple of notes:

Ignore the background. It sucks and I will fix it in gimp.

The challenge calls for illustrating lyrics. This was originally meant to illustrate the song White Shadows by Coldplay. But now that I sketched it out I think it sort of feels more like Viva La Vida (also by Coldplay. Ya I know -_-).

Anyway, thoughts on this as well would be much appreciated.