I just decided to remake this because...because I just besically didn't like how the girl turned out...I had to fix it. It was done for an AP project and I was in a rush to finish it so I couldn't make it as nice as I wanted to...

So hopefully this is better, perhaps I should have edited the other but...I don't know why, but I think I'll miss it somehow.

For a friend who dearly loves this story, and who I dearly miss.