this is artemis and andante from my story Le Secret Du Frere , a practice doodle i did in manga studio as practice, i'm going to see if i can ink it in, and learn to use the tone in it..... it's so confusing.....

i think i'm going to re-write Le Secret Du Frere and calling it Brother Complex, the story line is still going to be the same, i just don't klike the way i drew it and i feel as if it doesn't make sense.....

anyhow here the link to the story, you can go check it out and and maybe give me asome helpful advise? :

http://www.theotaku.com/fancomics/view/5612/le_secret_du_fr%2526atilde%253B%2583%2526iuml%253B%2526iquest%253B%2526frac12%253B%2526atilde%253B%2526macr%253B%2526acirc%253B%2526iquest%253B%2526acirc%253B%2526frac12%253B%2526atilde%253B%2583%2526iuml%253B%2526iquest%253B%2526frac12%253B%2526atilde%253B%2582%2526acirc%253B%2526uml%253Bre