The re-drawn version of Negami, completed outline 5-02-12, finished coloring just today. Ive probably drawn her a total of 5+ times until I finally came to this conclusion. This is the old [TERRIBLE] version of her. I feel so embarrased by that old drawing...

Story Recap/continuation from previous: [Note: I changed the previous "Tsukiyomi" to "Tsuki" as you can see]
For the manga, Negami is at first a caring, kind, girl who often has to yell at Neniji for drinking sake. Her family is the Saika's, she reigns from a long line of riflists. Her father is a retired mercernary from a previous war fought in Japan, and so he has a tanegashima mounted on one of the walls in their house. Negami's mother is deceased when she gave birth to her.

Because she is one of the chosen ones who can see demons, she must fight them. Negami's not too happy about this, but she puts up a brave front and wields a handgun to protect herself [as seeen in pic]. She doesnt like the fact of wielding a gun, even though her ascendants were pros at it. So she mostly tries to get Tsuki to fight them for her, looking up into the moon as much as possible as soon as she accepts the fact that a Goddess is using her body.

One day demons invade her home near the end of the school day and she goes home to find that out. Her father is a chosen one, so he can see them, and he is being attacked as she enters the house. Negami whips out her handgun to protect her father, but she is too late as the demons kill him in front of her. She angrily fends them off and rushes to her injured father. He tells her in his dying state that he is proud of her, and that he wishes he could continue living to protect her from those 'strange monsters'. But he knows he cant, so he tells her to take up his tanegashima and fight for the rest of their family. *death*

She becomes angry and extremly sad from her beloved father's death. In her rage she cuts off her hair [seen first in my sketch] to its current short state and vows to become stronger [Sakura moment much?]. Negami from that moment on vows to destroy the demons forever and avenge her father. She becomes less warm of a person, and a little more cold-hearted [the only things keeping her from becoming like Tsuki, Neniji and Kurina]

Aaaannnd thats all I have so far. If you are confused during any part of my story here, its understandable. As I type this up [I already had it thought out before] I [emphasis on the 'I'] completely understand what I mean.

Tell me what you think so far on this part of the manga/rpg.