I need to think of better tittles

I drew this a little while back, I was thinking of making a Zazzle and Society6 store and maybe thought of making this into something, they make books on Zazzle and I would quite like this on a book so I can have some form of motivation to work on their story. But I would like a critique and opinions on it first ^^
I quite like how it's turned out :) and I'm quite proud of it too ^^;

This is a scene (maybe :3) from pretty much the 1st night in the 1st city Lovell and Iven travel too together and they're still getting to know each other.

Commissions are open -
and I now have a facebook art page Please help I have no idea what I'm letting myself into DX

Tips and advice are welcomed as always :)
Lovell + Iven + art belongs to me

I hope you all like it :D