I'm now at my final year of working on the pitch for Revolver. I was able to sit down with my professors this spring and get some awesome critique and here's the final products.

Changes:
-Gave Danny a more confident look to fit his character. Also now looks his age.
-Gave Rena a sweeter face to fit her character
-Gave Rena full body suit for extra protection
- Went back to the baggier pants for Danny
-Omitted all the pouches
-Rena's arm conductors became protective pads
-Simplified boots

Turnarounds and basic info are up next : )
Also the new name of the project is 'REVOLVER: Solis War'

Logline: ' A cyborg soldier must learn to control the digital demon implanted in his brain to save the war-torn world it was meant to destroy'