This is so downright cute...

that was great and funny i love the face expressions

I LOVE IT!!!!! I get it then again i seen it before you put it up..... Bleach..... i didn't think it had anything to do with it. none of the chars even remotely come close to looking like any of them.... Well any whos i love it. FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY. I love the grope thing. And yes you did say end. lol i think im the only one that caught that.T_T kinda sad. Lol anyways. yeah yeah. that art work is scratchy. BUt i think it still looks awsome. i want to see more of this manga! Must have more lol

Hmmmm. . . interesting. . .haha but very funny! Keep it up!

O.o It had nothing to do with Bleach...it's the story from my original series. *ish all confused* The one char is an incubi so that's why he was all talking about devouring the other's soul. T_T

Didn't understand a thing!^^

god !!!! it's horrible !!! oh my god !!!! help me !!! :P just kiding !!! :P now serious. :| it needs to be worked more ! i'm gonna tell you. i don't understand the story. i just get that the you based the story in the manga of Bleach . and the artwork... you need to work it out. BUT in the end you seem to have a great imagination to create manga. keep basing your stories on the mangas that you reed. keep trying and you'll acheave the perfection k ??? x) :D stay fine ! GINTS x)

lmao. The end worked perfectly XD