Finally, I'm done. It's not to my liking, but I knew that it would take too much time to anal-retentively correct everything. Better just to post.
The characters I used are my OCs, Marshall (left) and Naomi (right). The links take you to better drawings of them with bios in the comments. I guess the most important thing to know is that Naomi doesn't like violence and knows very little about technology. Marshall is kind of a gamer, I guess. I haven't really developed that side of him much.