At last, I've came up with my best dialogues for this page and I'm very happy that some people really did share and offer their creative ideas to my fan manga. Without them... maybe, I couldn't have this page now. Arigato gozaimasu to all of you! i'm very glad that you keep on supporting and reading this fan manga..
I hope you enjoy this page even though it's very detailed! hehe...
NOTE:
About the GROSS thing> i just came up that Deidara's tech in creating clay bombs with the use of his mouth were a little kind of gross while on Sasori's... i think the gross act on him was the removing of the vital organs of the human he had for transforming into puppets...
I hope there are no twist on this page... I guess... tee-hee... HAPPY EASTER SUNDAY!
P.S: To those who help me... THANK YOU SO MUCH! and in exchange of your kingheartedness I created a world which I dedicated it to all who share their ideas to me..
If everyone wanted to read those scripts passed to me thru email you can see it at:
www.theotaku.com/worlds/babysitters
Edited/added: Sorry guys if it took time for me to upload the next stuffs since I currently no scanner is available and I try to post the revise edition around November, that's the month I look forward on buying a new one... I hope you can still wait but I make it sure its worth you're waiting and patience... arigato gozaimasu for the continuous support...See yah soon~