Alright, here's a challenge.

Criticize this comic. Be honest, tell me if this story is understandable or not because the response here and at Smackjeeves differs.

If it's not understandable, please tell me why.
If it's horrible artwise, just tell me.
If I'm bad at updating er... kick my virtual arse into drawing mode. I need motivation. :I

But no flaming. Constructive criticisms are fine. I'm quite at the edge here, after two years, the story is still difficult to be understood. Can you understand the feeling of creating something that people cannot enjoy? It's quite frustrating since I'm here to serve you all. ;__;

In other news, I finally have references for the characters. :) See here.

Till then. :)