Zomg!!!! I know there are a ton of mistakes :O I swear the comics get darker around the first chapter. This is the...eight paged intro >_>
There are a lot of smudges on this page as well. Around half way through this volume I decided to make Rebecca rich. And I had to change her normal house door to a mansion type door (you see her house later on into the story).
As much as I hate the art, I really like Skylar's eye in the fourth panel. I put some of my underused shading skills into play >:D Keyword: Underused shading skills. Well they're not really skills are they,no?
*huff* Well thank you for reading this far if you have ^_^ I swear it gets better. I'll try to buff out the next few pages so you won't have to strain to read anything,k?