Ah....I never went anywhere else after this. I had a bit planned that was going to be similar to the All-Star Break....and, of course, in the end, Yoshimi facing off against the enemy and winning, etc, etc.....but I learned several valuable lessons with this - the first one being: Do a Rough Draft.
I've never been one to do a draft first....but with manga I found it's important to have an idea where you're going....you forget so much when you sit down to draw...and it is SO MUCH EASIER to change a word, phrase, or panel in your draft than to have to go back and re-draw an entire page just because you want to make your dude say, "Hey, there goes Bob" instead of "Hey, where is Bob?"
Thanks for reading, if you've made it this far.