Did this hastily since I have lots of other pages to add further edit.
So yeah, it's not as good as the previous pages but my consultant-partner (whom I wish would help me with the artworks) says it's alright. Not every good manga needs that much emphasis on details and such.
Will add speech bubbles and texts as soon as I am done with at most 20 pages. Been doing this project half-lazily.
Oh I forgot to mention:
THIS WILL BE READ FROM RIGHT TO LEFT